Nice chapter although it ends somewhat abruptly.

I am not to sure about this. But I will keep reading.

Good plot line so far. Keep up the good work.

Liking it so far, can't wait for your next update. Only that I saw was that in a couple of words you didn't have any spaces. But that's it. So yeah, again, update soon please!

love it!

heys! im really liking the rewrite of this story so far...ryo electricuting Ryuu was priceless...and yea, i see you've changed Ryo a bit AND also claimed him as yours...now how should i punish you for this {thinks} {evil smile} love you sis!

Interesting.

I like this chapter! Please update soon!

Sincerely,
AshK

Good story so far! Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
AshK

Great start.

A great start keep up the good work!!

hey don't know if u rember me but i rember reviewing ur story called misunderstanding scars which completely rocks and is a fav of mine ,this storie sound and starts off really wicked, and can not wait to read more, i don't always get a chance to get on to read cuz i'm in the navy in japan rite now so plz update thou it rocks

so where the next chapter? i realy finds this story interesting. very nice with the flash backs. will jade be still a live as a eldar of will you have her be reincarnated as one of the grils engaded to ranma?
my say if your going to do this or hook him up with one of the grils is to hook him up with nabiki and have her be jade reincarnation. just a sugjestion.

also nice touch with genma get crused as normal the as a donkey. ^-^! ^-^! ^-^!

keep up the good work

Only read the first chapter, but so far I'm really liking it. Few, if any, spelling and grammar mistakes, making it easy to read. Aninteresting twist, I've always liked elementals.

Not too bad.