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| DancingGrass 2008-05-23 ch 7,  | abuseThat last one was so...depressing. But very well written! |
| hope-passion 2007-11-01 ch 7, | abuseoh, I like that she and parker didn't seem to get along. See, it show that you thought about it. I like it a lot :) |
| hope-passion 2007-11-01 ch 4, | abuseDon't worry about the 10 hits, 16 reviews thing: A lot of people just read without reviewing. For example they haven't gotten an account yet, just looking around, or just lazy. I think the people who review are people who've tried their hand at writing, so they can't Not review. That to me, makes the 5 out of a 100 hits a little more special. :) Really sweet chapter by the way, you've caught on to my secret weakness, Zach :) |
| hope-passion 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseDon't improve it, it's so good already I like it, it shows thought |
| Caramelchan 2007-04-22 ch 7, | abuseOoh I like. |
| muppetmadness 2006-12-19 ch 7, | abuse*Sobs* That was the saddest thing... All those people hurt. I can't believe how sad that was. Poor Ange, Jack, Zach, Dr Goodman, Parker, Bones, Booth, Rebecca. I couldn't really bring myself to feel that bad for the rest but it tugged on my heartstrings like hell. I loved it. |
| Spud31 2006-06-14 ch 7, | abuseI enjoyed the story a lot. I especially liked your take on Parker - most B/B fics have Bones becoming this fantastic mother, but I think she might have trouble relating to a child. So I liked your idea of her loving him dearly but not knowing how to show it. |
| invis 2006-05-22 ch 7, | abuseOoh, so sad! Very Cat's in the Cradle and stuff. But good. I enjoyed it, even though everyone died. Wah! |
| invis 2006-05-22 ch 4, | abuseAww. So sad for Angela! I love her character, and it's too bad she hasn't found a deeper relationship yet, but it works for your story. :) |
| invis 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoy Tessa's internal contrasts between herself and Brennan. There's a bit of pronoun confusion, but it's pretty much unavoidable, and you've done well to set them apart using italics. I'll definitely keep reading. |
| pagan-seijou 2006-05-10 ch 7, | abuseOh my gosh... that was great. So sad. It made me tear up! You almost made me cry! Wow, so good, though. pagan-seijou |
| BonesFAN! 2006-04-23 ch 7, anon. | abuseIt was deffinetly the most depressing to me but among the ones i like the most. I truly enjoyed this story and cannot wait for what you come up with next! |
| SBFAMILY06'-Luv 2006-04-23 ch 7, | abuseWow, I thought the whole thing was awsome! The one with Parker was my favorite! I absolutely luved it!! Continue writing your work is very good, I like it a lot!! -Kiss3dl3yAnAng3L- |
| avaleighfitzgerald 2006-04-23 ch 7, | abuseoh, my god, I'm actually tearing up reading this. I want to cry,. THat chaper was so beautifully written and so, wel, like I imagined their lives to be. Seriously, that was one of the best things I've read here. That cahpter was most defintely my favourite. I'm going to go immerse myself in fluff now, loved it! "Later that night, he found her crying, huddled against the corner of the sink and cupboards" and then the repition when she died. that got me so bad, i had to blink back the tears! Ava |
| claudia flies 2006-04-23 ch 7, | abuseWow. This was fantastic. I especially loved the Parker chapter, it was brave and though provoking and so achingly real. I loved the idea of looking in to their relatioship from the outside. Of how their relatioship affects other people. This was truly excelent, please keep writing :) |