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| Sydney Lynne 2007-07-31 ch 1,  | abuseAww, so bittersweet. Beautiful prose. |
| Tinker Ramone 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautifully written. |
| Dodger Gilmore 2006-11-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderfully beautiful. You are a truely amazing writer. I completely love this. |
| ggfan1979 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. The tone of that fic really mirrors how I felt when I saw that episode. Disappointed. I love Rory and Jess together, and I hate the way Rory is changing...I guess the question is whether she'll change back, like some of us do when we grow up. Your story's sad, but I think it's a realistic portrayal of what might going on in the character's heads. Really well done. |
| demersal 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. Very true, very insightful, very, very well written. |
| Fair-Ithil 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseThank you for not putting Jess in the metaphorical rut simply because Rory Gilmosre walked away. This was wonderfully well done. |
| Pin-ups and Paper-clips 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseOh god, that was so good. Please continue? I like Jess' perspective and how dark he seems. You did this really well. Cheers. |
| milovroxmysox 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuseVery good. I loved how you showed that he could move on. |
| you're my Star 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuse"And it's not that bad." You showed what a lot of authors can't (including me). That people exist outside love... wow. wow. wow. did I mention WOW? |
| A Murmured Silhouette 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuseThis was so beautifully written - sad, in a way, as it should be. This girl's got to stop fucking with his heart. |
| shobhnaguerin01 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really powerful. "Three years since their lips last touched." You know, that was exactly what I was thinking too. It had been too long. Great, great job. Very poignant. |
| Hallon 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was simply beautiful. It was perfectly Jess, and so sad and hopeful at the same time. 'And he’s got a life. Back booths, bad poets, and friends who might care if he stops showing up for work. And it’s not that bad.' Perfect end that gives hope for the future. Thank you for writing it! *hugs* |
| someone5 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseYou are...I have no words. God, I'm such a shitty reviewer. Okay, I need to focus. I just love that Jess is grown-up, and I love that he can handle it and I love that he has this great life. I love the way you write him. Hell, I love the way you write, period. :) Thank you for this. *nods* Thank you! |
| Fickle Sobriquet 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sad. Thanks for writing it. You know, I can't blame them. Milo's busy and people like Matt. But seriously, thanks a lot ASP. Also, it's 6x18, not 19. |
| FallAway 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWow. I always love your writing, and this was no exception. This line: "He remembers her when she was all curves (soft skin that formed to the shape of his hand like memory foam)." Just ... guh. Incredible take on the episode, and I love that you wrote it from Jess' POV. Amazing, amazing job. |