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CodeRomance
2007-09-27
ch 8,
abuseWell that was interesting enough...i was a bit confused but that was because i forgot what had happened previously...i think i took too long to read the update! that was bad on my part! good chapter though! i hope you update soon!

CodeRomance
Ambition for mercy
2007-08-17
ch 1,
abuseI love it!
great job!
Anita
2007-07-02
ch 8, anon.
abusei think the title is "The Bride" by Julie Garwood.
Twilight
2007-06-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhat is the name of this original Coultier story?? it is driving me mad trying to figure it out! I need to know!...aside from that, very good story, it sucked me in from the begining and now can't wait to see what happens next; in both your story and Coulter's.

keep up the excellent work. :)
Danica
2007-04-24
ch 7, anon.
abuseHoly ** **.

Why does it have to end there? T.T Why or=h cruel author.

Anyways, awesome sauce story. There are alot of spelling and grammar mistakes but those are easily over looked when viewing the rest of your piece. Hope you update soon.


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lonestar
2007-03-09
ch 7, anon.
abuseGreat story! Please do continue.
CodeRomance
2007-02-18
ch 7,
abuseWhat!! is happening! oh no!! this is bad! oh update soon! please i want to know what happens next!
Crimson-Kitten-of-Your-Drea...
2006-10-06
ch 5,
abuseI love Your story so far. I will continue reading if you continue writing^^ Catherine Coulter is my favorite Author.. But her favorite book of mine is Rosehaven...
PaJamas
2006-09-30
ch 5,
abuseIt is a wonderful story. Though you did make a mistake with some of the spelling, that can be fixed, and in this chapter you call them plaids, they are actually kilts, because plaid can be used not only for kilts, but for wraps and such. Other than that I love this story, keep up the good work.
CodeRomance
2006-08-19
ch 5,
abuseah what going to happen i want to know!! hurry up and update!!
knightsgrl
2006-08-06
ch 5,
abuseThis story keeps getting better and better! I can't wait to read the next chapters!!
JohnnysDoll84
2006-07-28
ch 5, anon.
abuseI LOVE THIS FIC!

This is really very good, and I just wanted to let you know you are a really wonderful writer and should keep this up, it is just amazingly well written!
knightsgrl
2006-07-22
ch 1,
abuseThis is a great story so far. I look forward to reading the rest of it!
Disabled-Cloud-Flyer
2006-06-06
ch 1,
abuseOh yes. I will update. I do have all of the chapters writen out alread. I just am unable to acess them at this moment. I will update when I can.
Emily
2006-06-05
ch 3, anon.
abuseHey there :)
I very much enjoyed your start and am hoping that you continue. :)
There's a lot of things going on here - such as a lot of back history into Elizabeth and Keith's past.
It might be interesting to do a memory flashback of them at age 8 when she was close friends with him and fell in love with him.
And maybe another one as they grew older.
It seems as though they have a lot of history together, and I'd like to see more details of that because it will help us understand their relationship now.
Good job, I can't wait to see more.
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