Holy kick in the face, this is so gooooood!

...please update this. seriously. i know writers have this whole perfectionist streak that results in them hemming and hawing over a chapter for two years and their readers waiting in bated breath/annoyance/exasperation, but i can basically guarantee you that whatever you post here will be received with delight and appreciation by all of your readers... you just have to post.

seriously.

pretty sure this is my fav rob/rae out there. you really really should update this soon - i absolutely love it!

luv it

well, i like it. i like it a lot.

i would love to see more of this.

Write more! Please! It's really good...

Aah! The link didn't work.

D:

But this is still sexy, hot, and I think I need a shower...cold shower.

I love these stories! They have a great plotline... and I just love it.. please update! )

oh please make another chapter please, i would like to know what the next part of the game is

Wow. I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapters.

no unfinished DX

must have an ending to such a story DX

giving in is just a chapter away XD

xoxox

:D

hot hot hot love that starfire knows nothing :)

xoxox

omg i loved it!

too bad there aren't alot of these stories DX

xoxox

Awesomest ever! I love every single one of them. You're one great writer! Love you!

wow, this story is awesome, the setup, the execution, BRILLIANT, love it the writing is great, and hell who doesnt like citricy goodness later yo