To me, slave fic, especially friendship and hurt/comfort, is the formula for absolute crackfic. Loved it.

great concept and story telling, I really enjoyed the way you blended your ideas with cannon.

Wow! you have no idea how I liked this fic! It was very interesting! I enjoyed reading it. It must have been very sad for Lupin to have that life.. although I'm sure things will be looking better now. Will he find another lover? will he ever get married? oh... the posibilities... great fic! is there any chance of a sequel? I really hope so.

well written. this was very good.

Very good

wo that was a great idea.

Oh wow! This one was truly amazing! Each little detail, all the emotion. Just plain wonderful.

well another great story... with another happyend ^_^

i havent decided if i like the SlaveSeverus best or this one... they are all very good written and i know its hard to write a slavestory, im trying one... but its german because swissgerman is my motherlanguage and tough my english is enough for writing reviews it isnt for a hole story i think -.-' oh i d like to write in english but i dont get my thinking right on paper in english...

well with Harry finishing Voldemort they couldnt say no to his wish to free the slaves, thats it, isnt it? And im happy about it

Mondkalb

That was a really interesting scenario! Major points for originality!

A chilling prospect that, although completely AU, is completely reasonable in a world such as canon Harry Potter. The thought put behind this was obviously quite a bit, and though now showy in its descriptions, the simplicity of its style made it flow nicely and gave it a nice feel; it left the readers to their own imagination. With just a little spur from you here and there...we can, in our minds, perfectly see every nuance of Remus Lupin's expression throughout the fic...and react with triumph at the very end. Simply put, you made these characters human.

Um, so what happened to the little girl that James bought? Wouldn't Harry inherit her as well?

loved it!

Only one word to describe this:
Intense.

amazing

wow! this is great. i loved it.
keep writing.
~Liz