Really cute. Seeing Ranger dither was worth the price or admission.

I loved Ranger's reaction... Perfect.

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What a great story!

Oh, so cute! Nice little one-shot, I enjoyed it.

Funny!

What a wonderful little story! Good work.

so far it's really good. keep writing

that was cute. i am surprised that she wouldn't have noticed it before hand, or at least been suspicious of it, i mean wouldn't you worry if your period was late, esp. with the amount of sexual activity they were involved in. good story though, ranger was a bit out of character, i mean a dozen children, i don't picture him doing something like that. other than that, well written, good one shot.