what happened to atem and yugi? I DEMAND TO KNOW! (

Wow... that was depressing and so very, very, disturbingly realistic. ((sigh)) If only things like this were so easy to fix...

Esh! I'm depressed now! In need of fluff!

Umbrae

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ah very depressing. Yugi gave it a good go but really i bet help could be found if he confided in another. Plus if it is anorexia, which is what it sounds like, there are a number of different techniques...personally i think a sequel to this showing Yugi trying again with better insight would be good. Like admitting Atemu to a clinic or something...my mom always threatened that she would if i ever showed signs lol

sorry sorry i'm rambling :p poor Atemu...poor Yugi!

I cried...I went threw this with a friend of mine who ended up dieing because she wouldn't eat. Sometimes they just need someone to slap them. Very good

Whoa... I like it. This piece of very well-written. It seems realistic, in a sense. So was Atemu anorexic? It seemed like it...

Tis a very good story. Hope you and Heather last a long time!

IT's more depressing than sweet, but good job, though...

I cried throughout this whole fic.

*sigh* I AM really sorry, love... truly and honestly. Just how you portrayed me in this fic, I don't want to hurt you... hell, I don't wanna hurt MYSELF. u_u I wish I could see things differently. It's not that I'm not listening to you. I listen to EVERY word; they just get defeated by the demons inside my head. They tell me that I'm ugly and overweight... that I shouldn't be happy with who I am on the outside.

I promised you I would get help, and I WILL. Please wait until after July. You know why. *heart* You're more important to me than my own self. I want you to be happy... *sigh* and I realize that in order for that to really happen, I need to be happy (with myself).

You ARE helping me in SO many ways, my lovely koi. Like I've said, you are the ONLY one (outside my family) that has stuck by me and tried to help me through these hard times. I thank you for that from the bottom of my heart. I love you more than anything, Ali. I'm willing to do anything for you, even if that means fighting off the demons in my head at full force, I WILL do it for your sake. We WILL live happily ever after, if I have anything to do with it.

I love you with all my heart, my precious hikari. I'll see you on YIM on Saterday. *curls up on her koi's lap and purrs lovingly*

This was sad... Heh, maybe this calls for a two-shot! ;)

Well, anyway, I did like it, even if it was depressing... Nice work.