:o Woah. I have gotta say, that was real hot. Nice descriptions and spelling, grammer, and writing format.

Aw. So cute! Very well written. Great job!

That was hot!!
Great Story!!
Update Soon Son!!

Sounds almost exactly like me and my ... sort of girlfriend. lol. only its not first kiss kinda thing. ;D my POV haha, she's like Maureen

TOTALLY AWSOME!

I always appreciate MoJo fluff! I think you shoudl turn this into more than a one-shot, but i guess that's up to you...you're the author after all! but if you don't, thanks for the great fic, write more soon!

Sounds like my ex and me, her POV. xD

Excellent job. You write very well.