You really have a way with words.. This is tragic but real T__T

I'd like to see the second chapter.

Why was your account deleted before?

-MomijiKK

this reminds me of my first heartbreak SO BAD. the phone conversation, stan saying "why?", having no one left to ask for answers, the note in the locker filled with emotions and then in his reply he just doesn't care... and the way he wants to paint the core of his soul.

dude... how many times have you been dumped? :o heehe i'm joking. this was just so wonderful and i felt every word.

OMG. That was great. I'm shocked. Please, please, please post the next chapter! or email it to me ;)

Oh God, the same thing just happened to my best friend and I. The same words were said and everything, your story made me start crying. It was just so perfectly put, I could feel like I was there. I hope you continue.

Tears, tears, tears, and more tears.
Please put up the next chapter!

Aw... that's so sad. I want to give Stan a hug so badly. :(
GAH! There must be an explanation for this. NOTHING can come between Stan and Kyle. NOTHING. Unless there's a really, really good reason for it.
This was beautifully written, of course. Very heartbreaking. I don't thin I've ever really read a fic that focused on Stan and Kyle falling out before.

i love your writing. this is so concise and beautiful, i don't even really know what to say or what to compare it to. your stuff kind of reminds me of the sp fanfic of this one livejournal user, "sayafterme." it's really good stuff, and you should check it out sometime (I promise it isn't me and i'm not just shamelessly self-promoting). one story, "how to commit a murder," is simply amazing. here's a link: http://sayafterme./149520.html
KEEP WRITING!

beautifullt written!
poor stan! i feel so bad for him

Oh jesus. You just ripped out my heart and stomped on it a hundred times. KYLE. KYLE. WHY??

I absolutly love this. It has so much truth to it, it's scary. I'd love to hear why Kyle's changed so much. But, excuse my ignorance, but would your account get deleted from posting a sequel?

This was beautifully written. It sucks to see their friendship falling apart, so I would like to see Kyle's perspective, if that's at all possible.

Maybe I'm a glutton for punishment. I said I had to stop reading your stuff, but I opened this one anyway. Beautifully written, excellent descriptions...and very dark. So very, very dark. I like the way you write. It's inspiring.

I don't usually like S/K fics but this was nicely done, I hope you continue it!

This is absolutely gorgeous...A real journey for the reader. The imagery is simply stunning, and both Stan and Kyle are realistically portrayed. Into my favs this goes!