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| Sora Blade707 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's so cute! I love it! Please continue with the good work! |
| Queenofinsanity 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAW! How sweet! |
| Dante-Raven 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. It had that childlike quality that I haven't felt in ages. What struck me the most was how you wrote it in first person, which is marvelous. For some reason, I couldn't help but think that the Exile was more of a female, but then I continued reading and the more I thought about it, the more I realized that you wrote this to swing either way. (I didn't read the Author's Notes until after I stopped thinking--go figure.) Anyway, aside from all of my rambling, it was very well done. Very innocent and playful, very childlike. Good one. |
| DarthNexus9000 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseinteresting story. At least you have another one-shot up |
| Hiita-hime 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseOh CUTENESS! I love it, love it, LOVE IT! Baby Mical! SQUEE! Ahem, anyhoo, this is a brilliant, sad oneshot; keep up the good work Cortessa!! :D Adrieal x x x |
| Dranzen 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseVery cute and well-written. I don't understand WHY the Exile ran away, and I don't know if I'm supposed to. ~Zen-chan |