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| D.S.A.K 2008-06-12 ch 1,  | abuseWhen are you going to continue this story? |
| sofia815 2007-12-04 ch 4, | abuseAH! The awesome-ness where did it go? A YEAR (and 5 months)?!?!?! COME BACK... and etc. Now that that's out of my system... this is way awesome, super and all that jazz. Love the storyline (although I've probably only seen a smidge of it) and the characters (not OOC, yet unique) and all the other stuff... though I'm gonna add a small delta here and say that I think you might want to reread it (if you don't already) when you upload it into the documents manager. Sometimes fanfiction will replace one specific phrase (like in one fic I read it was 'oak') and turn it into another word (in the fic it became... oh what was it... well it was something else, like some other type of tree or something, and in the fic instead of 'cloak' it would say 'clfir' for example). In this fic it wasn't that bad though (I did after all still understand and love it) so be careful... and update soon (if you can). Keep up the good work! |
| My Dreams are My Wings 2007-11-24 ch 4, | abuseSam's mom has some strange ideas. By the way Ilove this. It's so true! |
| MidnightSun1901 2007-08-26 ch 4, | abuseI love this story! Please update soon, I'm about to go crazy! Please and Thank you. |
| Toyoko 2007-08-14 ch 4, | abuseNICE STORY!!. I know you’ve been on this story from last year or so but I’m just reading it. When I finished chapter 4 I was like, “Okay, where is chapter 5?” I have absolutely no words, at least no intelligibly constructed words/sentences to comment on how wonderful, original, interesting, creative etc. etc. your story is. And the words that this review contains so far does not do your story justice. You are great! They should make you ruler of something! |
| Amanda 2007-07-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseUpdate as soon as you can. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Amanda |
| Fantasy93 2007-07-18 ch 4, | abuseT.T I thought that was Danny, why do they have to dress alike! |
| fan of ur story 2007-04-16 ch 4, anon. | abusehey omg i simply love this story u have to continue it it rocks! u got great imagination and a u are a great writer please continue the story |
| Siren of Time 2007-02-22 ch 4, | abuseWoot! This jams! update A.S.A.P. |
| Xweetok 2007-01-20 ch 4, | abuseJust as all of your stories. Breathtaking and Beautiful. UPDATE! |
| Wiltedr0es 2007-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou'll never have a boyfriend. You're too busy writting crappy stories. |
| Crazy About Purple 2006-12-27 ch 4, | abuseOH MY GOD!! I absoloutely LOVE this story! You have to update soon or I'll die! |
| Saxy Sara 2006-10-15 ch 1, | abuseawesome chapter!! just rereading this story and i can understand a little spanish now (thank u zero period!)! anyway...i think u used the rong porque. i think its suppose to be Por que? w/ an accent over teh u, which im sure u know means y. and the one u used, porque, means becuse. so...ya. |
| JosephineInLove 2006-10-08 ch 4, | abuseThis is REALLY cool. Otherwise, I'm speechless. |
| Animekitty07 2006-09-17 ch 4, | abuse@_@ oh my..lol wats gunna happen? im alittle confused but not really haha weird but colie anyways keep up the good work and i cant wait until ur next update! see ya! ~*Animekitty07*~ |