 Looka'sMagicHell 2009-11-08 . chapter 4I just simply love the story! you should totally update, i really want to know what's going to happen! from the looks of one story, I can tell you're a great writer! Can't wait for the next chapter of this awesome story! |
 Pop Dragon 2008-08-24 . chapter 4 is there goign to be a jelous Danny in the next chapter? (wonder what he'd do, Gregor/Elliot is a total jerk.) update! plz |
 just a fan 2008-08-17 . chapter 1 simply love the story, you should really update it, you're a great writer |
 Midnight Water Vamp 2008-08-06 . chapter 1aww please continue this story i think everyone has been waiting ages to find out what happens i want to know now :( please:) i need to stop going on the computer at nite i scare people laugh so lyk i siad please finish it soon i can't even remeber when i read it i think it was sometime last year oh wel :) |
 D.S.A.K 2008-06-12 . chapter 1When are you going to continue this story? |
 sofia815 2007-12-04 . chapter 4AH! The awesome-ness where did it go? A YEAR (and 5 months)?!?!?! COME BACK... and etc.
Now that that's out of my system... this is way awesome, super and all that jazz. Love the storyline (although I've probably only seen a smidge of it) and the characters (not OOC, yet unique) and all the other stuff... though I'm gonna add a small delta here and say that I think you might want to reread it (if you don't already) when you upload it into the documents manager. Sometimes fanfiction will replace one specific phrase (like in one fic I read it was 'oak') and turn it into another word (in the fic it became... oh what was it... well it was something else, like some other type of tree or something, and in the fic instead of 'cloak' it would say 'clfir' for example).
In this fic it wasn't that bad though (I did after all still understand and love it) so be careful... and update soon (if you can). Keep up the good work! |
 Hidden Behind the Mask 2007-11-24 . chapter 4Sam's mom has some strange ideas. By the way Ilove this. It's so true! |
 MidnightSun1901 2007-08-26 . chapter 4I love this story! Please update soon, I'm about to go crazy! Please and Thank you. |
 Toyoko 2007-08-14 . chapter 4NICE STORY!!. I know you’ve been on this story from last year or so but I’m just reading it. When I finished chapter 4 I was like, “Okay, where is chapter 5?” I have absolutely no words, at least no intelligibly constructed words/sentences to comment on how wonderful, original, interesting, creative etc. etc. your story is. And the words that this review contains so far does not do your story justice. You are great! They should make you ruler of something! |
 Amanda 2007-07-20 . chapter 4 Update as soon as you can. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
Amanda |
 Fantasy93 2007-07-18 . chapter 4T.T I thought that was Danny, why do they have to dress alike! |
 fan of ur story 2007-04-16 . chapter 4 hey omg i simply love this story u have to continue it it rocks! u got great imagination and a u are a great writer please continue the story |
 Siren of Time 2007-02-22 . chapter 4Woot!
This jams!
update A.S.A.P. |
 Xweetok 2007-01-20 . chapter 4Just as all of your stories. Breathtaking and Beautiful.
UPDATE! |
 Wiltedr0es 2007-01-03 . chapter 1 You'll never have a boyfriend. You're too busy writting crappy stories. |