*disgusted* I never read this story and I assure you I never will! Uhh! Takedai, that's revolting! You're sick!

I liked it. It's incredibly cute!

es spicy! *Rwoar* anyway very sweet and suggestive.

Veeeeery nice. _ You did a great job with the symbolism-very few people have that style, so keep up with it!

YES! Finally some double meanings! I LOVE inuendos! not to mention these boys are the cutest thing since sliced bread. (wait, can I make that analogy? Sliced bread isnt really all that cute... O.o)

*shrug* oh well. keep it up. I'd love to see a sequel!

-Julia Shizuko

(who thinks somebody should squish Sora under a big, heavy grand piano)

hehe... powdered donuts... takeru... and daisuke... *grin* just too cute... and speaking of matt and tai... and ice cream? hehe... *thinks bad thoughts with the three combined* okay well anyways... very cute indeed. _

I love this couple...Daisuke and Takeru together...they make an exellent couple! Keep up your writting! I love this story! /_

Ooohhh... _ Delicious Takedai! And CUUUUTE! I loved it to pieces!

i cant even tell who the cahracters are!

*squeals* *melts* You know, you could hurt someone, waving something this cute around...

Very cute. There were a few errors grammar-wise, but otherwise it was written well-I do oh-so-happily-love your descriptions. Me liked the The Tight Shirt muchly. *leer*

Cute. Powdery rather than fluffy in consistency. Wish i knew what body parts you were talkin' about sometime, and the clothed state of these kids. (What? Takeru in *only* his hat? Kinnkyy!)