That was really beautiful. I love the POV of the story, no dialogue, just snippits of their life together, all the happy moments and the bittersweet ones too. It definitely had me misting up. Keep the Trory love alive!

I adored your story. I have no idea why, but it struck me. Currently, I'm covered in tears running down my face and dropping onto the digital camera I was playing with before I read your story. I have m earphones in my ears with a completely ecstatic song by Bowling for Soup blaring but i can't stop the tears. I tried singing, but my voice cracked. You are a really amazing writer. I've never had someone cry from my writing, that I know of. I never envoke this much feeling in a person. And I know that if my writing was just a fifth of what your's is that I'd be happy for the rest of my life. I don't know if you meant to portray the motto Carpe Diem, but that's what I got from your story. To live life and cherish EVERY moment we get, because we might not get them back. That we might never see our siblings, or parents, or loves of our lives again after this moment, that they might not see us, and we have to make these moments, these second count. And I don't know why, but it makes me think, think about all the moments I shouldn't take for granted that I do. I may never have moments like these again, but i just wanted to say thank you. So there it is Thank You.

Wow. I almost cried. I was loving the happy ending but it wasn't the ending yet and I realized it wasn't so happy after all. This was really amazing though. Especially since it was different and didnt have the happy ending I expected.

I dont know if I have reviewed this story or not but I want to so I am.

Everytime I need a good cry I find your story and read it. I start bawling when he left her the first time because I have memorized this story and I know its not going to change.

I love this story dont ever delete it please.

I'm still bawling. lol.

~hales

I LOVE THIS STORY...i cried very touching

m crying...this is beautiful!...wow!ur amazing!!

You made me cry.

beautiful, is the only word i can think of to describe your story.

Oh my god, that was so beautiful. I, honest to God, cried. It was so touching and bittersweet. And what's better, is that it's something that everyone can relate to. The pain of losing a loved one. The hurt and anger you can't help but feel towards them for leaving you. And even though in your heart of hearts, you know it's not their fault, that doesn't change the fact that they're not there with you. And you loved them so much that you hate them for leaving you. But you live for them. My god, this story is so beautiful. I love it. I really love it.

Ok, yo oficially have me crying now. I loved it! I feel so sad just reading that and I... I just loved it.

aching. sweeping and wonderfully written.

So wonderfully, tragically, beautifully sad. I think it's very telling of their banter relationship that she would be angry at him for leaving her, even if it wasn't his fault. They always were that way with one another. It's perfectly in character, and I love it.

Okay...you made me cry which is the best compliment I can give to a sad fanfic. *going to check out your other stories if you have any*

I cried.

That was so beautiful! It made me cry so much (I'm such a girl) I loved it keep up the good work!