A good piece of introspection. Well written.

Ah I said I'd review, so here it is! 8D (wow your fics are actually pretty popular too! XD)

Anyway...I liked how emotional and dramatic you made this fic. I thought Remus was kept pretty much in character. I also liked how you used a lot of description and not a massive amount of dialouge. It was really great. *A*

One comment I'd like to make is that while Remus DOES hate the moon, he is also SCARED of the moon (as proven by what appeared to him when he fought the practice boggart). I didn't really get the feeling from this fic that he was scared of the moon. The only feeling that really rubbed off on me was hatred, not so much fear.

Overall, a nice fic! :D I look forward to reading more of your work if I ever stop being lazy. XD

Fishy

I like it. Very poetic, very emotional. Good job on a Remus-centric one shot well done. :) .

Oh, that was a very interesting take on Remus. I think you have an excellent piece of work here...definitely very original.

Hmm, the only thing I would change is, perhaps at the end having clarified if the other boy was James or Sirius. It was probably James, but Sirius played Quidditch too, so we can't be 100% sure.

Other than that, it was superb!

Keep up the brilliant work!

Yours

Elbereth94

Wow! Again, very poetic. I can really empathize with Remus (although I'm not a werewolf). I love the way you made him adore and despise the moon rather than just despising it, very realistic if you think about it (supossing that anything dealing with werewolves can REALLY be realistic). Anyway, it's late and I'm crazy so that's all I'm going to say. And that you're a fantastic writer.

Poor Remus, forever cursed by the moon. Could you imagine! Being hurt by such a lovely globe of light. The horror.

Well, I'm in a much more somber mood after that. Now I feel the need to mourn for poor Remus. So I guess, the story was really well written, to play on someone's emotions. Well done.

Very well writen! I enjoyed that.

Very strong image. Beautifully done. (-;

Remus didn't deserve that fate.