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| The Tyrant Hamster 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseWell, this is different. You say you don't like this fic much, and don't take this the wrong way, but I guess I can understand why, it doesn't seem to have as good a motivation behind it as most of what you write. Honestly it's not one of your better stories, but it's not really bad either, as I see it you should feel free to express yourself through your writing, and this very clearly is driven by depression and troubles which it does convey, so in respects of stories being forms of communication, it's really not bad, not as good as some of your other works but it gets the message across, and it holds the reader's interest to the end, so yeah, not bad, I hope it helped at the time :). |
| (T_T) 2007-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abusewow... it's so sad... I adore dante and i LOVE dantexlady but in this fic, I think it was totally right that Lady left dante. Good for her! lesser woman wouldn't have had the courage! *GLARES AT DANTE* EVIL WIFE BEATER! *POINTS* Dante: (>_ |
| Tenma-Chakun 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. What can I say. This is truly amazing. You showed true emotion (that of which I have never seen) in your fic. Though with your reputation as a writter I expected nothing less, bravo. -The Angel Kid PS: Truly I don't mean to snoop but your fic sounded rather "human" as if talking from experience. I don't prentend to relate nor do I pretend to be anything above a reviewer but if for any reason you feel the need to talk I will always be here for you or any one else for that matter. |
| Shadow Wolf22 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseIt's been a long time since I've been on this site, but let me just say that it is good to see that the good things never disappear. It's good to read your writing again and I hope whatever brought about this dark mood is settled. Life's short. Have fun and enjoy it. And this is excellent. I wish you well... |
| Sam Valentine 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good story. Very intense. Can you please make another chapter? This has great potential to be really interesting in terms of what could have happened and what will happen. |
| Veronica 2006-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseAt first I was disappointed at this because Dante is so mean, so cruel, and not what I would see of Dante but on second thought, it's grand. It shows his weakness, his human side and that in the end, he's only a man who makes grave mistakes. You show a strong and powerful woman, who is Lady and how she won't put up with that crap. Incredible, Simi. I like it. |
| Vylet Lust 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseSo sad, but it was a good read. Another nice piece of work from you. Can't wait to read more of your upcoming works. Keep it up! ~p.k. |
| Illicit Memory 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseWow... So sad. I can see you were really depressed when writing it. (Yes, even though you said so. xD) It's really good, and no, not at all incoherent. |
| JessicaCrimson21 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseso that's what happen to Dante and Lady i was wondering on hwta happened to them |
| Chaos Encarnate 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseit's a good one shot, but you are really concerning me with your depression. seriously Simi. I love you to death. Don't go off on some tangent and get hurt.. (hugs) love ya lots. Demoness |
| Lori 2006-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuse(awe struck) ... Wow.. That's so sad.. but yet, I can't help but think that is a very real possibility to someone like Dante. It's so sad.. but yet I love this fic. |