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| ReJo 2007-01-28 ch 9, | abuseI love the way you bounce from POV to POV while still telling the story in a linear way. |
| ReJo 2007-01-28 ch 8, | abuseI can't wait. |
| ReJo 2007-01-28 ch 5, | abuseMy anxiety level is at an all-time high... |
| A 2006-10-29 ch 12, anon. | abuseDamn you're good. Just lovely. |
| ForensicsFreak1988 2006-08-14 ch 12, | abuseAw... poor Stella. VERY well written. I love that they had dinner together and the "food as good as yours" line. |
| DistractedlyHere 2006-08-14 ch 12, | abuseThis is a beautifully written story. You are a gifted writer. I will definately be on the lookout for your stories. BTW - this was very believable and in keeping with the characters as portrayed on the show. Well done. |
| snowbear96 2006-08-07 ch 12, | abuseLovely and very good. Plot bunnies yay! |
| wjobsessed 2006-08-06 ch 12, | abuseThat's not that weird-Christmas in July is a popular thing... This was a great story. I like how you had DL join Stella for Christmas Eve dinner-I could see that happening. When I get a chance I will re-read this whole story. And will be waiting for more DL from you :) |
| Mrs. Fitzgerald 2006-08-06 ch 12, | abuseThat was such a sweet ending! Great story! |
| chili-peppers 2006-08-05 ch 12, | abuseOh wow!i love this story! well done!! your a awesome writer! |
| saturn567 2006-08-05 ch 12, | abuseyeah, but Christmas stories are so enjoyable! They just make you smile, and are great to read anytime of the year! Keep it up! |
| artigiano 2006-08-05 ch 12, | abusethat was an awesome story, altogether, and a perfect ending! :) great job! |
| cyko1003 2006-07-25 ch 11, | abuseHoly ** that made me melt. That was just ... wow. I read 10 and 11 at once here, and it just totally got to me. I actually got chills, and that hardly ever happens when I read these. Just ... holy crap this was good. YOu switch between the two points of view so well, so smoothly (i've read some where it's nto smooth at all and ends up disrupting the flow of the story), but you've got it spot-on. This was just fantastic, I can't wait for the next update. Congratulations! |
| oddie33325 2006-07-24 ch 11, | abuseLOVED IT MORE PLEASE |
| Shortcake82 2006-07-24 ch 11, | abuseI don't think Danny is the kind to say dear, but other than that it's really cool. I like it. |