the story is so cool.

oh that was good! gotta keep reading!

yay, yay, and more yays!

oh yes wonderful, wonderful drama.
hm... you didn't turn this into a soap opera intentionally did you?

i loved this chapter!
so good!

nice chappie!

Wow! This story was so awsome! I am really looking forward to reading the third story, which I will sart as soon as I finnish this review. You really have a lot of talent, and I love getting on to read your work. I am working on plot lines for stories of my own, but I am totally screwed, I can only hope they will come out half as good as yours have turned out

Eliena is a little, no very scary and alot like alanna. also i dont suport the jonalanna ahip but i will tolerate it

Leo laughed so hard that he had to clutch his stomach from pain. - AHAHAHAH. I laughed so hard here.

YAY. DONE. Well, at least done this one book, and now I have 54 more chapters. WELL DONE.

Good. Reading more. NOW.

Trying to read. Fast. Must. Read. More.

I WANT MY COOKIE!
It was awesome. I love you. Go kiss yourself.

HAH. A Goddess? That will be very interesting. Oh man, I don't know... interesting may be an understatement.

YAY. I got to reading again. I'll probably be doing a lot of that lately. I don't work till next saturday.
You ARE evil. VERY evil. But, not too evil, because I can just go read another chapter. HAHA.

Yes, the line you mentioned is familiar. I'm pretty sure it's from Song of the Lioness--isn't it? And WHAT DA FREAK? You're gonna make Eliena fall in love with Numair? I like the guy and all, and yes, I like Numair/Daine, but Eliena Numair? WHAT DA HECK? It just doesn't seem. . . right?