interesting one shot. I would have enjoyed a little more interaction with the human boy, but good none the less.

Haha. Great story. I loved the comment about the mom comment. That make sense? Whatever. Yay nice story!

PyroMac

I had a variation of this storyline in my head a few days ago, but this is far better than what I could've written. You describe both of them really well - exactly as I would've imagined their characters to act. Good job.

Yeah, that's pretty dark. Liked it a lot. :o)

WOW...this was excellent. I love the contrast between mutants and humanity, how, like the new and old metal, they clash. Great use of Dies Irae...its one of my favorite pieces.

This was very deep, I'll be thinking of this long after I've finished reading it...