This was really sweet. I love fluffy stories. :D

Aww so cute!

this is so cute! I really like it. Great job. Aw, its just so cute, I can't help it. Keep it up an write some more!*SMILE*

Great begining with the character developement, but now think about added a plot into the story. This is a good prologue, but it doesn't really go anywhere. It isn't much of a story at the momment. I hope your intention is to continue it.

cool!! write more