Aww, that's sweet. I would have liked a little more development - why did Shuu want to stay away from his brother so much? Was it just that he didn't want to be part of Shin, or did something precipitate this?

*sighs happily* Oh, I really liked that! That's the first time I've come across a fic narrated from that particular point of view. I like the Kido brothers, that was fun. And the image of Jyou with his hair pulled back wearing a green sweat suit... *drools* I also really liked the idea of Shuu and Shin as twins, that was just neato. This really was a fun little fic, I'l have to check out the rest of your stuff. Too neat.

Gyah! I LOVED that! The Kido bros rock, and I love the way you wrote Shuu, and I enjoyed the fact that he and Shin were twins. Too, too cool! - Awesome fic!

Interesting story, though I don't quite understand why the twins need each other so much. Btw, the Volkswagen is actually a German import, not an American car. Although it's getting difficult to say these days whether a car is domestic or imported, since so many foreign companies have plants in the U.S. now, and vice versa, and the parts come from so many different countries.

Oh, wow. I love everything about this story - the title is very clever, and I loved the mention of "Miyazaki-kun". Hey, anything about the family Kido wins points with me! Great job! :)

yea! great fic!

How interesting... I don't think I've ever read a story that revolved around Shuu. And I've never heard of Shuu and Shin being twins... Actually, making them twins makes it a lot easier than trying to figure out which one of them is older. First I hear that Shuu's older, then Shin's older, then... *_* Anyhow, this was nice! I loved reading Shuu's talk with Mr. Takenouchi; neither of their characters have ever been written for, as far as I know. And the part with Jou and Gomamon was cute. _ Keep up the great work!

Love this fic! I love anything involving the Kido's specialy Shin! Very, very kawaii! I love it.