aw, very sweet!
kind of a sad ending though!
great job, congrats!

i love your riting and i love this chapter its realy nice thanks alot
xx
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"The pure quandary of it all was that Lily Evans had a replica Mirror of Erised on the inside of her eyelids." Wow, I love that last quote. I don't know why, but it is just so... awesome. Great way to close an amazing fic. I guess that's all I can say;)

aw! this is so to cuit!
i hope there´s a second part!!
the end was really sweet, congratulations!
great work!! :)

Wow! This was amazing!

Damn. This is so good. I never exzpected to read something like this but it makes me feel so happy. I'm so proud and grateful to have read this. I hope I can make something like this too. You're amazing!

aw
poor jamesie!~
lurve ur fic :D

sweet, but James should have gone after her. Just to make her tell him the truth of what she saw.

this story is great. its one of those ones i always remeber and tend to rate other stories on because i just cant forget it.

FREAKY!

How this ended was so ... poignant :'( . It's brilliant how you turned the simple idea of looking at the mirror of Erised that way into this lovely piece.

thats sad that she didnt tell him

aw

aw, that's sad :'( why cant they be together?

great! i luv this one!! make it a two-shot? please?