|Reviews for From the Bottom of My Heart|
| Guest 5/16/13 . chapter 3
This story just gets better and better. Love it!
| Jazzword78 1/27/13 . chapter 1
Very solid chapter. I enjoyed reading it. Except for the few curse words, I give this chapter a solid review. Your writing style and development of characters were relaxed yet poignant. I look forward to reading the other chapters.
(I have always enjoyed the show and the story line of 'In the Heat of the Night'. The characters made the show)
| HarleyQuinn92 1/2/12 . chapter 4
I am enjoying this story...very romantic and touching once you get over the age thing. Go Lonnie and Monica! :)
| HillbillyofDoom 4/17/06 . chapter 4
Be warned, I'm brutally honest. ;)
At first, I groaned. Your original character just screamed "Sue!" Too pretty, too smart, too tough, center of the story... After a bit though, you fleshed her out a little and showed some faults and insecurities. Made her a bit more believable.
I'll admit, not a big Lonnie fan, but even I grimaced at where the story was headed. BUT, if one wants to go there, you did a pretty believable job of it. You covered the realities of such a relationship pretty bluntly.
You write better than most here on ffdotnet. Only saw some very minor typos. Always good to see a writer who can have two plots running at once. Some folks will forget that Heat was a cop show. They need bad guys to chase.
Keep writing. I'd love to see what you come up with next.