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| Sweet Jorja 2008-06-06 ch 6, | abuseDamn- I really do hope you're right about having more time to give us more!! lol. I have an idea in my head of which one is Leilynn but I'm the kind of person who just stays in the back of the room waiting to hear someone else get the answer. That- and I'm usually wrong so either way I know who it is lol. Write more soon! *hug* |
| Sweet Jorja 2008-06-06 ch 5, | abuseThat's messed up! I didn't know those guys were on Chicago Hope! Not that I ever watched it- I was still a kid then lol. But that's so cool! (IMDb is amazing) I got so excited when I saw that you had more IM dialogs!! AWESOMENESS! |
| Sweet Jorja 2008-06-05 ch 4, | abuseSo I was gonna wait and reply when I finished reading all you had posted- but the IM conversation? Fricken hilarious! Sounds like something that might happen with me. Perfect example? It's now almost 3am and I'm not going to bed yet lol. Awesomeness! BTW This is Sweet-Kaywinnet from DeviantART ;) |
| Gwen Gamgee 2008-01-11 ch 6, | abuseSam would be the obvious chioce, but then, you wouldn't make it obvious, would you? THat's why you had two people show up. THere fore, I choose Rob. Plus, that would just ** Morgan off. Keep writing, Gwen (Brittany) |
| Lum 2007-11-24 ch 6, | abuseGreat story, I hope that you decide to continue it. I also wanted to let you know that there are only three races, Mongoloid, Caucasoid, and Negroid. So it would be more accurate for Rob to say that she is born from 13 nations or countries than races. All in all this story is fantastic and I really hope that you post more. |
| LegendMyth 2007-11-07 ch 6, | abuseI think that the second one has to be Leilynn. The first was a jerk to Reid, and that just doesn't work. Leilynn knows who Reid is; there's no point in dismissing and alienating him if she's to work with him. |
| insanity-is-my-life 2007-07-22 ch 6, | abusei love it i think o'brian is leilynn this story is so good update soon ~Jess |
| Spooky Bibi 2007-07-21 ch 6, | abuseI wasn't expecting two! You took me by surprise there! So far I like Robyn better but somehow I believe you are misleading us and Sam is actually Leilynn. Paranoid, I know! It was a good chapter, funny and original but I think Reid's resentment of Sam is a lttle exaggerated. She didn't do that much to offend him. Or maybe Reid has an angry side we didn't know about and you're introducing us to it. Which would be nice... Update soon, I'm eager to see where it goes! |
| tearbos 2007-07-16 ch 6, | abuseI've loved the whole story so far. I especially loved this line:"was doomed to be quietly despised by a super genius for all of eternity." I laughed so hard when I read it. |
| LNFPH4077 2007-07-16 ch 6, | abuseSo, you're not going to tell us which one of those was Leilynn, are you? I guess I'm just going to have to be confused. That's okay, though; I've spent most of my life confused and am just really glad you updated. Hysterical as usual, by the way. It's a shame more people don't do things like this, because CM definitely needs more humor. Garfield Sudoku books? I would totally buy one of those. Even though I get frustrated with sudoku after five minutes. Speaking of taking out mailboxes, my brother did that once. It was a brick mailbox and he totaled my Mom's Volvo. Our parents were none too happy about that one... Teaching yourself two APs? Ouch. APs are hard enough without teaching yourself. I had to teach myself a Forensics class last semester because the teacher was horrible and that was bad enough. I can only imagine trying to teach myself an AP... |
| SpencerReid 2007-07-16 ch 6, | abuseUPDATE! awsome job I love having the fact that Reid has a DEEP haitred for someone else I can tell that it's going too be REALLY funny as the story progresses, happy writing. XD |
| RogueHoney 2007-07-16 ch 6, | abusehaha thats amusing. i like it. poor derek. update soon. |
| Gwen Gamgee 2007-07-07 ch 5, | abuseYOU DIDN"T WRITE ANY MORE!? Honestly. You have ME sucked in and I dodn't watch the show. You are CRUEL. By the way, it's her, isn't it? It has to be! It is it is it is! anyhoo, anytime you feel like writeing more I'll be here, stareing at the screen... waiting... bye. Gwen |
| Gwen Gamgee 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseYou were right! So cute even though I have never seen this show. I already get his charector so well! If you don't know who this is, you talked with me July 7 and know me from NSLC. Sorry, truly picky about my name on line. Anyhoo, this is really good! Gwen |
| AbbieNormal182 2007-02-22 ch 5, | abuseI can't say that I'm a huge fan of the bringing the real life people into the story thing. Unless the point of your story is "hey Reid, by the way, your life is a TV show." (I.e. The Truman Show sort of thing) then I would change the trivia questions. I guess I don't like to be reminded of the fact that these are not real people. Regardless, it's a very good story so far. Definitely have me questioning who Leilynn really is. Good start so far, and good luck on the rest! I'll add this to my story alert. Abbie P.S. The TV show is Chicago Hope. |