That was beautiful; short, sweet, and simple. Excellent work.

A lovely story that focuses on an interesting 'missing moment', The details you've included about how Bill felt about Dumbledore are great and give a good insight into what that character would have been goiung through at that time. The way you've shown the support offered to Bill by Fleur and his mother is also wonderful. Good work and well done.

that was sad, but I liked it greatly! I have to admit though, at first I thought you were going to write that Madam Pomfrey was his hero...haha. well that should actually be more like Harry's(or Hermione's, one you take the whole Chamber of Secrets thing into account), since she's helped him out on countless occasions(plus she grew back his bones. umm can we say cool lady here?) Anyways this is pretty long, but it was pretty good also. Hope you keep writing!

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