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| Little Prue 2008-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseShe should have kissed him to try and get those grapes back!! It's really cute!! |
| beaglelvr93 2007-08-23 ch 1,  | abuseJeez! I was laughing my head off. MY GRAPES! FREAKIN FUNNYBUNCH! LOVED IT! |
| passionfornight 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseIt may have been OOC and pointless, but it sure was hilarious. |
| couturexbones 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseLMAO |
| Chickapow 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseOk, i dont really see Brennan going crazy because Booth stole some *grapes*. I understand it was OOC but it was just silly. The part where she runs around screamin "My Grapes!" did make me laugh. |
| NYPD55Chick 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuse:) That was cute! It would be interesting to see what happens to Booth when she does catch him. :P |
| Hawkeye Girl 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseLOL, we all have our silly moments. Cute fic! |
| obsessedwithspike 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseYou are one of the strangest people... This was completely OOC, and yet I find myself strangely amused by it... It was just too darn funny, lol. |
| Bella1812 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseThat is Hillarious! lol |
| wolfmyjic 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseLOL...silly but very cute. i can see them fighting over grapes. Infact, I've had a fight over grapes...but it ended a ...little...*cough* differnt. |
| pagan-seijou 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseYeah, it was silly! But cute! pagan-seijou |
| SimpleNClean92 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseIt was very cute and funny, there's no way I could criticize it! I hope you write more stories soon! |
| MintExpresso 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseThere are a few things that could be improved- some of your grammar is wrong, and that gets pretty distracting... little things, like not putting any kind of punctuation at the end of sentences in quotations, or using 'to' instead of 'two'... Also, OOC doesn't always mean it's funny. I think the idea of Brennan getting annoyed at Booth for stealing her grapes is cute, but if you rely on the characters doing things they wouldn't for all of your humor, it's going to fall a little flat. I hope that was helpful, and I hope you keep writing! |
| SlaYeRGiRLkaL 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseHow can anyone critize something so cute and funny? |
| SuperRainbowMuffin 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuselol awesome fic ^_^ really funny =D |