oooh the bitterness of love that can't not be! Such a lovely story I love the vibes you get off of Axel and Sora *swoons* you should write more of this pairing (/)

If a game of pretend can get a relationship started(sort of) it should be done more often!

Doesn't matter, I enjoyed this nonetheless!

Heartbreakingly lovely. Axel and Sora never really appealed to me as a couple; Axel just seems too devoted to Roxas as Sora is to Riku and Kairi. However you made their relationship very plausible and it was beautifully done.

-sniff- aww, that's so sad..T.T i go 'yay!' when Sora didn't chase Riku. XP and when he whispered the name 'Axel'. yet i call myself Soriku and Akuroku fangirl. i'm so weird.. XD

*wibbles madly* Oh, this is gorgeous and heartbreaking. Just perfect.

It...it's over? But...but-::cries:: No...! ::fades away::

Awh, poor Axel. Sora leaves him, damnit he should have stayed! (Which is odd since I love RikuSora) You just turned me into an AxelSora fangirl!

I can't stand it! It's too sad... I love it and hate it at the same time... poor Axel. ::cries:: This is by far one of my favorite pieces I've read. I love your writing style, and the characterization is great. Keep up the wonderful work!

Will there be more? I'm actually starting to like this coupling and your story rationalizes it in a good and logical way. I hope you write more!

o_O

*shock*

O.M.F.G.

So short, to the point, and really, truly moving. There's a LOT of emotion showing through this. It got to me. I was staring at the screen nearly in tears.

(wow, I'm not usually this analytical. .O Darn creative writing class...)

Anyway... *dies* *from sheer brilliance* Oh god. It's so beautiful.

I really like your AkuRoku fics! Even if this was AkuSora...same difference, sorta...right? Oh, never mind. The point is, please keep writing more like these!

This was another one of those

*really real*

pieces that I've been finding.

And I love it.

This was really good,

And really sad,

and really wonderful.

All that really.

Yep, so...

Buh-Bai

Sona

Aw man! I sure thought Soar would stay with Axel. ._.; Oh well, it's still a good ending even if it's angst layered. XD

Your writing skills are wonderful. _ You write enough to feed our hungry eyes, then cut-off right when it was getting interesting, but we are satisfied and wait for your next piece. :D Soraxel in this story is a bonus. 3 There is not enough Axel/Sora love out there!

Dude, this is awesome.

I like the tense you use, interesting but very good and I love the second to last line, what Axel says. And then the part about not having a heart and also the its what I like about you part.

Awesome and I can't wait for you to update again.

are you sure this falls

under the 'k' rating?

ah, not like i care. i love

the plot and the characters

and. 33 oh boy. i love how

you defined their kissing and

the transitioning.

lovely.