Reviews for Chicken Soup for the Lost Soul

mimi the philosopher 2006-06-11 ch 1, anon.	abusei thought this was a really great fic. i like ur word choice and how u intertwined and had the right balance between street language and (i think) poetic language. u made me actually like reading a story that involved church. u captured the feelings of a 13 yr. old but also didn't make him seem childish but a little beyond his years.
Dr.E. Vance 2006-04-22 ch 1,	abuseThat was MUCH better. You fit the quote in there and it flowed this time. I was only slightly confused at this sentence: "If I did all those things, now I don’t." Did you mean to write it that way? Am I just being oblivious again? I liked it a lot. Two thumbs up. Hoo-rah!