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Waterfall Shinobi 4/16/06 . chapter 1Me likey! Escpeically the subtle SasuNaru! Will there be more chapters? |
Silent Note 4/15/06 . chapter 1I think its a very cute story! |
NekoAnime 4/15/06 . chapter 1Wow, this was superbly written. And also the first tutor story I've read in the Naruto fandom. And I'm so glad that it popped up in my inbox. XD This has such a nice spin to some of the other school/college stories that I've read (Not that the others weren't good.) it's just different and I like that. _ I love Naruto's personality and Sasuke's too. Shikamaru always manages to make me laugh. He's just one of those characters that doesn't seem like it takes too much to get him in character. I could be wrong though considering I've never written a fanfiction in my life. ; I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I want to learn more about Naruto and Sasuke's pasts. How his parents died and if Itachi is gonna be in it or not. I actually liked the whole hooker thing too. It was a nicely added effect to the story to really hit home how bad the area is where Naruto is living. Oh and the fact that your feet are in the shower if you sit on the toilet. Wow. O_O I hope Naruto gets a chance to go swimming too. _ Until next chapter. Oh, oh, one more thing. This was an excellent story considering it was your first time writing in this fandom. I should have said that earlier but oh well. _ |
DracOnyx 4/15/06 . chapter 1 I was wondering when you would put this up, habibi mine. You already know my thoughts on it, but I'll put them down anyway. I love it, move your ass and write more! |
destroying tokyo 4/15/06 . chapter 1Very interesting. Update soon, please. |
KC Evans 4/15/06 . chapter 1Hehehe, Kakashi is pure evil. Oh, the things he does to torture his students! Unfortuntely (or fortunately?), he's also usually right. Loved the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke. You've made them very true to their character while throwing in the funny parts to make me laugh. The details you've added in like the swimming pool and the car seat just made the story all the more realistic. Really looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to read it! |
Blah 4/15/06 . chapter 1 Write next chapter soon! This story is really good! |
LemonsEatMyBrains 4/15/06 . chapter 1This is awsome! update soon! |
necrophile 4/15/06 . chapter 1oor! *.* :D this story is fantastic! i really really like it, velleh velleh mooch! :D please please continue |
Mizuki hikari 4/15/06 . chapter 1continue . |
jenko 4/15/06 . chapter 1 alrite, i hate 2 be a mood killer, but that...sorta sucked, sorta, i didnt say it sicked completely, all u have 2 do is add a couple of chapters and a semi-lemon, or they can go all the way |
blue-genjutsu 4/15/06 . chapter 1Really great so far! Can't wait to read more! :) |
mellinde 4/15/06 . chapter 1I'm so happy you did a Naruto story. Really good so far, I can't wait until they get to be...friends...*haha* Update soon please! |
Back of Beyond 4/15/06 . chapter 1can't wait for the next chapter, absoloutly loving this story so far! |
TinyClownBean1 4/15/06 . chapter 1I just love all your works. I thought your YGO fanfics were amazing and then to find out that you had a Naruto one...*sigh* I'm just so glad that you started one. So far it's wonderful. I lvoe the characterization and how you threw them together. You've kept them so similiar to their original selves...this has got to be one of the best Naruto fictions I've read yet and it's only the first chapter! Can't wait for an update! Your talent astounds me. |