   xXBittersweet MelancholyXx
2008-09-02 . chapter 1This is awesome! |
 Chibi Shika
2008-02-20 . chapter 1erm... kind of confusing, but I like it. Happy ending, that's always good. Just a helpful hint, the dialogue is a bit awkward. try to make it sound more natural. |
 tearsandrainbows
2006-05-22 . chapter 1Actually, I think I will cry... |
Ash025
2006-04-18 . chapter 1this is cute, update soon |
sAsUkE_n0_hImE
2006-04-16 . chapter 1 KAWAII!=3 |
 Ms. Demeanor
2006-04-15 . chapter 1Ok, that was confusing, but cute. |
 HeartAngel
2006-04-15 . chapter 1How sweet.At first I wondered if it was a NarSak fic but gladly it wasn't.Your a good writer I really liked your Scribbles.You shall be on my fav authors list.Kept up the good work!^-^ |
 diet coffee
2006-04-15 . chapter 1That was Nice! Keep it Up! |
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