it's a good storie

Please update

I'm hooked

I'm impressed; it's a nice piece of work. How are the sequel(s) coming along - following this new world is going to be a wild wild ride, I can tell.

Heyas

i loved that story, nice true character portrait and great story. overal

(destro voice) excelent work commander. :)

keep at it, i cant wait for the next story arc.

Hmm.. COBRA won? They're a legit superpower nation now, eh? Definitely very cool. _ (Ok, so I'm a COBRA fan, I admit it..) This just gets more interesting.. Can't wait for the second arc to start up - I hope it's soon. ;)

It was good-and spooky as well. Cobra has there own country-Oh, dear, Oh, dear , Oh, dear. At least the Joe team is back to deal with this situation. And yes, I am very much reminded of star wars. Good luck with the next parts-I'll look forward to reading them.

I somehow managed to miss this one until you updated the fourth chapter. I'm certainly quite hooked, now. ) Very well-written, great action and characterization. Most interesting, and I'm looking forward to more!

Hi! The story is going great! Hope you get the next part up soon!

Great! What a good ending-so suspensful. I like the idea of Scarlett being 2nd in command. Will you be posting this story on Suzanne's fanfiction page?