sorry, but I can not read anyfarther. You've spelled too many things wrong! it's SESSHOMARU!

*Clap Clap* it took me two day's to finish this I love it keep it up.
Ja ne.

when you are trying to say 'us' you utilize 'use' and when you want to write 'waist' you use 'waste'. Those words have different meanings, so be careful although they are phononymns.

what? i thought this story was about kagome and SESSHOMARU!
Oh well, i guess i'll have to read the next chapter. see ya.

just to let you know jaken was spelled wrong it is spelld jaken and neroku is spelled wrong it is spelld naraku dont worry i spell stuff wrong all the time

I know you probly didn't know or just didn't do spell check but there are a lot of spelling mistakes and grammer mistakes, also sesshomaru doesn't have in h in it so you should change it

loved the story! can't wait to read your other ones!

Wow this was a great story! I really enjoyed it. I hope you will maybe write another story! Again a very great story!

awsome story, it was truly great.

im not gonna cry what ever yo do you will not make me cry...Wah

YAY IT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD

MORE PLZ

Neraku shall DIE! Oh and good story. :)

Holly #, he's ganna kill the baby this is getting really good now. I don't think he will kill the kid though.

aw... the poor baby it cant die! newayz very good story so far i cant wait to see how it ends