 Kingkakashi 2009-09-25 . chapter 16A very creative and original story. I just discovered it and read it straight through. I really hope that you will update it again soon and that it hasn't been abandoned. |
 x.X.Yuzuki.X.x 2009-04-18 . chapter 16This story is so funny and i hope u update soon with more fabulous n interesting chapters that make me lol. XD |
 grafton 2009-03-18 . chapter 16finally another good story to read that has a good bit of humor in it |
 SNHunter 2009-03-18 . chapter 16I love this story, but seriously u are way over due for an update. i'm dieing to find out what happens during the duel with Neji and Naruto and how the story will end in general. do u know how long ur story will be cuz i don't care how long it is, as long as i get to continue enjoying the story.
Also why is Naruto so afraid of Anko? i'm sure she won't hurt him, much, lol. from the looks of the way the stories going i have rly no clue who he'll end up with in the end. ur sending mixed messages with all the girls reactions, but it none the less leads to a great reading experaince.
Kepp up the great work. i can't wait till chapter 17 comes out. |
 T3Ko 2008-12-19 . chapter 16Great story. Shame that you haven't done more of it almost past two years. |
 1020 Gates 2008-11-19 . chapter 16KU KU KU.. I Like It. Its cool and funny |
 garsdal 2008-10-18 . chapter 16epic niceness:D
looking forward to the next chapter |
 L33t Horo 2008-09-15 . chapter 16UPDATE PLEASE! |
 CelticReaper 2008-08-19 . chapter 16Awesome ^_^
update soon please |
 The Guy 2008-08-17 . chapter 2 Awesome |
 Nightmare the Shrike 2008-08-16 . chapter 16Sakura should be charged with abuse or something. |
 darkwolf1990 2008-08-10 . chapter 16Amazing story! absolutely love it! cant wait fore more so please update ASAP! |
 lunaticxxx 2008-08-03 . chapter 16ory, looking foward to next ch. |
 JustinRoy 2008-07-18 . chapter 16Nice way to incorperate Love Hina into Naruto, all Harem stereotypes are represented and given good measure. Anko as the overassertive sexbomb (Kitsune), Hinata as the shy admirer (Shinobu) and Sakura as the main love interest who doesn't know what she wants (Naru).
If you keep following the 'Love Hina' line you could say that Kurenai represents Mokoto, a bit overagressive and hypocritical of situations and Ino acts as Suu the playfull tease. But that is up to you and how you make the story I guess.
I like the addition of Kin, it gives a good side 'arc' into the world. At the moment she can be anything from the 2nd love interest or just a red herring. I think she represents Mutsumi for a bit. Tragic but still optimistic and with a somewhat mysterious past, anyway I just plain like the way you have 'treated' her sofar.
Adding Moegi and Hanabi into the mix should give some volatile situations and I really would like to see how the duel would turn out. It is a great way to keep us guessing though :).
I do miss 'a promise' as that was one of the main plotpoints in 'Love Hina', but seeing as this is your story I guess you have something else in mind and I would like to see how it turns out. I wouldn't mind pitching in some 'ideas' :P.
Anyway great story sofar and I hope you can keep up the high standards, can't wait till chapter 17 hits. |
 Frozen Wolf13 2008-07-06 . chapter 7I have noticed an on going mistake in EVERY chapter it isn't a big thing just thought that I could give you a quick grammar tip...
Blonde/Blond mean DIFFERENT things, It is one of the few words in the English language that has a Masculine/Femine form,
Blond= Boy or in this case Naruto
Blonde=Girl or in this case Ino.
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Just a little help for the future |