NO! Why has this story stopped at such a big cliffie? Please please please update soon!
FT

No more. NO MORE! I'm going to cry...
*sob sob*

What!?
You cannot just leave us off at this point, not with this huge secret plot you threw at us!
Please update soon, I am begging!

I was just wondering if you were going to finish this story or not. Could you please reply back. Thanks!!

i love this story- the conversations between lily and james are so smart!
please update soon

this is a wonderful story. i hope you update =].

Hi I don't have anything constructive to say other than I realy like your story and I hope that you update it soon.

-me

Please Update! This story is great!

Wow, that was a good story!
I really enjoyed reading it and I cannot wait for you to update it!
It was captivating and I could barely pull myself away from reading it. I hope that Lily can be herself in some future chapters and that she will tell her mother that she doesn't want to marry that horrible man Edward Chamberly!
Have a great day and please update soon!!

THIS IS SO GOOD!! UPDATE THIS!!

EHHEHEHEH!
just have to say again that i think u are hilarious
and UPDATE SOON YOU FOOL!
HAHAHAHAHA*manic laughter*

hahahahahhaa
i FRIKKIN LOVE YOU!(not litterally of course as i am a very
straight female but still)
YOU ARE BLOODY HILARIOUS!
oh and i just have to say
that most of the stuff on ur profile page that ive heard of i
really really love
and i love your fics!
because u are utterly AWESUM!
and btw i prolly wouldn't have reviewed without that Karl Pilkington quote
hes awesum! LIKE U!
ahahahahah sorry i must seem like the biggest lamest idiot
in the county but i dont care becoz u r awesum

I must say, you are quite the storyteller and I must admit that I am quite taken with it.

Ha-ha I think I should stop reading your story over and over again, because I'm starting to talk like the people during those times (or at least, I think I do...I highly doubt it actually)

The way the characters are potrayed is very well done and I catch very few errors (I don't even think you've made one!)

Hopefully you will continue this really awesome story soon!

i am such a hypocrite for saying this but... you haven't updated in over half a year, and that makes me very, very sad. normally, i don't bother reading fics that aren't completed, but i love your writing style. PLEASE update.

please?

I know it's been more than half a year since you've updated, but I really think you should try to update this story soon.
Even though most of the time, it bothers me when a story is set in a different time period / when the characters aren't in the same situations (going to Hogwarts), I don't feel that way with your story. I think it's because you've kept the characters the way they're supposed to be, and aside from the characters you've added, you haven't changed them.
Please try to update soon. :)