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Princess Hinata Hyuga
2009-08-31 . chapter 15
This was a truly AMAZING story and so awesome to read.
Nathan
2009-01-09 . chapter 15
That was so good!I Accually cried!...I really hope you make a sequal.oh yeah! if you ever do plz email it to me!im a strong fan of naruhina and if you email me all the sequals you make(or dont make...)I would literally cry!





Send me a sequal!
C7 Bounce
2008-12-02 . chapter 8
Im surprised you had trouble with this chapter. I really enjoyed it!
The flashback gave good background into Hikari. And I liked the interaction between her and Hinata and then Hinata with Naruto.
Really good story so far!
angel5411313
2008-06-01 . chapter 15
omg that was so good I hope you make a sequel...please make a sequel but i loved this fanfiction
nightwind83
2008-04-09 . chapter 15
very good
tailedfox225
2008-01-31 . chapter 15
yeah a sequal or an epilogue would be nice...I'm kind of confused.
Sam Witwicky
2007-12-22 . chapter 15
so what exactly happened in the end?
haipa-chan
2007-10-02 . chapter 15
I didn't really get the ending so if you could umm email me and explain it a little more. Also i think you should really make a sequel.
Fury of the Tempest
2007-09-13 . chapter 15
realy good I think a sequl might be nice
barbie12k
2007-07-25 . chapter 15
hi i read ur story but i did not really get the ending can u please mail me to discribe it like where did she go,why how please please
xh
2007-06-05 . chapter 15
beautiful. Seriously; there's little tears running down my face...I'm normally cold-hearted as hell, so you're on a winning streak here.

Loved the ending, loved it to the point of tears, as you know.
Tears Parallel
2007-06-03 . chapter 15
Wished you hadn't lost your interest with the pairing, great story, though. The ending leaves a lot of inferring, which many of us dislike. They could have ran away or hid in a place they wouldn't suspect. Of course, Neji wouldn't smile if they suicided together :P
swartzvald
2007-05-08 . chapter 15
what? that's it? thats weak sauce man. where's the cumuppance? the justice, the big cathardic final dust-up, in which the just are rewarded and the wicked punished? *sigh* you're a good writer but you've got alot to learn about Story-telling
jenniebennie
2007-04-15 . chapter 8
oh my god i love Neji in the fanfic. i know its finished but go Neji
braindamage730
2007-03-25 . chapter 15
i like this story very good
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