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nightwind83
2008-04-09
ch 15,
abusevery good
tailedfox225
2008-01-31
ch 15,
abuseyeah a sequal or an epilogue would be nice...I'm kind of confused.
Naruto Namikaze
2007-12-22
ch 15,
abuseso what exactly happened in the end?
haipa-chan
2007-10-02
ch 15,
abuseI didn't really get the ending so if you could umm email me and explain it a little more. Also i think you should really make a sequel.
Allan pike
2007-09-13
ch 15,
abuserealy good I think a sequl might be nice
barbie12k
2007-07-25
ch 15, anon.
abusehi i read ur story but i did not really get the ending can u please mail me to discribe it like where did she go,why how please please
xh
2007-06-05
ch 15, anon.
abusebeautiful. Seriously; there's little tears running down my face...I'm normally cold-hearted as hell, so you're on a winning streak here.

Loved the ending, loved it to the point of tears, as you know.
Teresa Pham
2007-06-03
ch 15,
abuseWished you hadn't lost your interest with the pairing, great story, though. The ending leaves a lot of inferring, which many of us dislike. They could have ran away or hid in a place they wouldn't suspect. Of course, Neji wouldn't smile if they suicided together :P
swartzvald
2007-05-08
ch 15,
abusewhat? that's it? thats weak sauce man. where's the cumuppance? the justice, the big cathardic final dust-up, in which the just are rewarded and the wicked punished? *sigh* you're a good writer but you've got alot to learn about Story-telling
jenniebennie
2007-04-15
ch 8,
abuseoh my god i love Neji in the fanfic. i know its finished but go Neji
braindamage730
2007-03-25
ch 15, anon.
abusei like this story very good
lil-c-girl2218
2007-02-11
ch 15,
abuseAAUGH!! I want to scream, cry, and curse all at once!!What happened!! You need to make a prolog (or however you spell it) or I'll go crazy!! please!
Boby09
2007-02-10
ch 1,
abusei think it's pretty good so far
sveta89
2007-01-16
ch 15,
abusegreat story
Darje
2007-01-13
ch 15,
abuseBravo!
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