Another great chapter, thanks for the update!

I'm really liking it. I've spent the past day reading the whle fic. Darcy is now my fav Winx Club character.

Fantastic chapter! I Loved It! The adventure continues. What happens next?

"I better go." he bent down and gave her lover a kiss on the lips. "I'll see you tomorrow night." he=she

"Adria rolled her eyes. "What hell are you doing?" she asked, taking the clipboard from the air." the between What and hell

"...Either way I'm given that opportinuty..." Opportinuty=opportunity

"...At least then I could try to teach something positive about herself." maybe place the word her between teach and something

"Idea number two is where they get me to get close you, like I am now, until you trust me enough to call me a friend. Then I take you out for shopping but really I'd knock you out and take you to a forest and hide you there for about five months. Within those month those months,..." to between close and you. those months is written twice

"As Rose led her away from Clowd Tower to wherever Flora was..." clowd=cloud

Good guys keep popping from the most unlikely places! I completely expected Adria to be a bad guy. I am sad to see this is the last chapter right now and can't wait to read more. I can't wait for Rose to get Bavalon under control, that girl is in need of a lesson for sure. I liked this chapter, full of surprise!

"...a smile that that reflected love and devotion." that is put in twice

"My child, people can say any things..." any=many

"...hand thought her hair as she waited for Griffen's reaction."
thought=through

"...You not going to want to use your gift here…” you= you're

"...It was a school she could have easily fit in and had she note met Rose..." note=not

"There many types of witches in this world, Rose, what are you?" he asked seeming to be an innocent question." are between There and many

"...how thought that all witches were evil and mean." they between how and thought

"He motioned for Griffen to stand with her and held out his arm for her to take..." to stand with him

"...perhaps even Razputine or Scoripous." I believe his name is Scorpious?

"Rose let Darcy slide the ling on her hand." ling=ring

Just when I think the story is coming to an end something new comes along that has to run its course. You keep this story fresh and you give the reader the need to read more, to know whats coming! I will be reading the next chapter!

"Adira?" she approached the wavy haired witch cautiously." i believe her name was Adria

"Adira's expression then turned impassive as she nodded." again the same thing and in the next one as well

"Adira raised a curious eyebrow."

"...and I'm not going lie, I will always be a bitch." to between going and lie

"...that Adira would agree to help her take..." again with the Adira

"...she blush Rose was producing was..." she=the

"Darcy growled, he dark side kicking in because of the potion." he=her

"I think she wants a chance to do the protective mother thing after what happened the last time." She smiled softly. "Personally, I'd like to shout it to the world, but I can see her point. Politics is a pain in the behind love." this here was placed in the story in two different paragraphs at the end of the chapter

"So, Bloom say nice things about me?" she asked sarcastically." say=says

This chapter made me worry and also was very sensual. I'm definitely wondering what Bavalon has up her sleeve and eager for Rose and Darcy to do the ceremony so Rose wont be in pain anymore. I will be reading the next chapter!

"...She had decided she need and very much wanted a shower..."
need=needed

"...not only did she had a matching scar on her other hip..." had=have

"...trying get a tangle out and cursed as it pulled on her sensitive scalp." to in between the trying and get

"...and mustered up al her courage..." al=all

"…didn't want to loose my sisters." loose=lose

“If I’ve leaned anything from all of this..." leaned=learned

“We had said that loved each other..." we between that and loved

"Well I'm trying to do to things at once..." to=two

"...went to the jewelry store together?" jewlry=jewelery

This chapter was very surprising. I figured Icy would take a lot longer to realize what was right and wrong. Im very surprised at how strong Rose's issues are, felt very bad for her feeling as she did about her feelings when Icy put the lotion on her. This chapter was good, definitely reading the next!

"You know that fight we had with Icy a while back?" he took a deep breath..." he=she

"...the only for it to break is if one of the partners die." add in way between only and for

“Want to talk a walk with me? It might clear both our heads.” talk=walk

"...She didn’t want to set the dark witch’s ire off again..." ire=fire

"Thinking of the wasting time that the fighting caused.." wasting=wasted

This chapter was very well thought out. The apology and Rose's acceptance was very heart warming. The ending definitely makes a reader such as myself want to read whats next!

A long wait but well worth it.

Please update soon, Darcy seems to be up to something!

You are an amazing writer:) This story is very good, i love it, couldnt stop reading it

u like writing long chapters don't u xD

Fantastic chapter! Thank you so much for updating. I have been dying to know what happens. I loved the wake up scene. It was a hoot. This chapter was very well writen. Loved the ending. What happens next?

Yay another chapter finally!

First, let me say 'thank you' for continuing this, one of the finest Winx Club stories I've ever read. I'm sure I speak for many of your other fans based on the comments and reviews.

And the plot thickens. It will be interesting to see where events lead everyone.

Please update soon!

Please don't stop here! This is one of the best fanfics I have read!