I love this story and have come back to read it again several times now. Great writing!

This was excellent! The writing style was fluid and descriptive, and I could see each scene vividly in my mind :) Great job!

BRAVO! I really enjoyed this story immensely. Your character portrayals were right on target. Very good job! Keep typing!

Carter can be kinda creepy! Most of the time he is a rather simple/stupid, then he comes along and impersonates maniacal Nazi officers...like when he does Hitler...and then he goes back to backwoods bumpkin and charms the little girl he just terrified...amazing.

That is a good Thanksgiving...

I really like your Hogan stories, I'm a big fan of the series and your stories are like finding an episode I've never seen, which is a neat trick!

This was really good! I loved Hogan in this one, though it seemed like one second he was on the brink of going unconcious, to being able to do all this other stuff. This was, partially, your intent, but I think you needed to make it a little more believable. Other than that, it was a great fic, and I really hope you write more! And add some more of Newkirk in there! * - * Heh heh...ok, so Hogan and Newkirk are my favorite characters!

Kits

This story is a perfect example of why I read fan fiction. The characterisation was so well done it was almost like watching an episode. I most especially like the way you captured usually shy Carter's ability to play a manic nazi officer. The action sequences were well timed, fast but not rushed and I liked the original characters. Well done.

good i realy liked it. you did very well with the people. got them down good.

What a great ending & great story!

FINE STORY. LOVED EVERY WORD OF IT.

This is the second story of yours I have read in this series. In both stories you have done a splendid job! You have worked on developing the characters and their relationships yet have stayed true to what we already know of them. The plots of both stories have been interesting and well developed. I hope you will continue to write and post in this category.

I really liked it, as well as your other story. Keep 'em coming, I eagerly await another.

Nicely done. Very Hogan's Heroesesque and excellent character development across the board.

Another great effort, Syl. Remember my challenge on writing the end, I think you're getting the characters down excellently!

Very well written. I love some of the emotions you've captured in this and of course, it's lovely to have early stories of the Heroes, when they were first starting out.

Great story! Well-written with a very original and fantastically executed idea! Kepp writing!