love it xx

I really like this drabble. Its so short, yet there is alot of emotion in there, especially towards the end. I would love to see what scenario this drifted from to your thoughts, but maybe some things are left whimsical and un touched. Good work!

Angstyness abounds! I love little drabbles like this!

O wow! Short but angsty... i love it!


Ali

Incredibly short - that's undeniable.

Also the best freaking drabble I've read - now that's undeniable.

um! GAH! What happens next? This snippet is amazing, there is so much tangible tension, the language that you use is amazing. I love how you describe the scene, it's such a nano second of both their lives but so...important, so...lasting for eternity? I'm not sure how to phrase exactly what I mean. But I love everything you write, it's always well written and so real.

Awesomely written! loved it.

Wow, that's sad.

*sigh* i love draco and hermione. especially angsty draco and hermione. although i wish this were longer. you should write more... like... either where they go from here or what happened before this.

May be, you will continue this? Please.

There is passion in everything you write because you have passion for writing. God has gifted you indeed.

Oh, that's nice! But I love happy endings, you know...;)!

I just wanted to say that I really liked the first three sentences. The description was really... I can't think of a word right now. I found the "ironically green courtyard" intriguing. Ironic? How? Is it summer? Is it just that it's a Slytherin color? I also liked the description of the way he caught her wrists and "sent a sting of pain up to her hip." Also, the word "they" in "where they couldn't see" because I know exactly who you're referring to.

Well, that was certainly a nerdy review. lol Oh, and good title as well.

ahh why'd it have to be so short!!
i wannana know what happens!
ggez
but it was angsty!

Continue? *Holds out virtual cookies as a bribe*