Good chapter, glad to see the twins!

Nice scenes with the twins. After reading the last line of this chapter my only thoughts are that someone is going to be in a world of hurt in the future. Keep up the good work.

It went something like this:
*looks through inbox*
Hm, letter from mum, story alert, story alert, live journal update, new chapter of The General Said-, story favourited, review alert, review... Waitaminute... *scrolls back up*
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OMFG!! WHAT!?!?!?

And yeah, you just made my day.
This chapter was awesome. Just as amusing as the ones before with the added bonus of the twins being in there! I do love the twins. Almost as much as I love Ron! Although your Ron is an **... sigh...
And I love the General's reaction to the news of Jack being pregnant. Bring on the anti-acids!!
Great chapter. As always I wait faithfully for more, since this story is well worth any wait.
Cheers!!

Love the update. Can't wait to see what the Goblins dig up on Charlie's death and Jack's enemies : )

Someone is going to die. The question is who. Love the story and looking forward to more. thank you. Wondering when Thor will show up.

i love it

wow, this has gotten even better since the last time i read it [not sure how long it was then]

plz keep wrting

This story is just too much fun. I can't wait for more!

I really like this story so far, and hope to see more of it. I also hope you're feeling better.

Lol, great story, I hope you write more!

two million bride price? i think he could get at least 4 million, a bottle of good scotch and a toaster oven.

The odd pairing not withstanding... this story is hilarious!
Can't wait for the next chapter.

ouch 4kids at once, lol i hope its oni 1or2 but its ur story :) i look forwarrd to ur update :)

Hysterical! I can't wait to read more!