 Suyiro Motsuko 2009-11-19 . chapter 12As I read the last line of the story, Amy Lee said it herself in her song, it made me smile.
I love this story, the pairing seemed a little funny to me but I loved every minute of it. I love this Riku so much, it seems like him so much than the usual one you read about, and this Axel too.
I have to say what I loved most was how you went about it, everyting took TIME, nothing was rushed, it seemed believable and real and you get a plate of cookies for it, lots and lots.
Thanks so much for such a heart-warming story, I shall now rape your page for more to read even though it's early morning. Toodles lol |
 KnightlyLady 2009-10-11 . chapter 11Hahaha, I play just like Sora :D I can't sit still. And the triangle button is my favorite. And I get told it's "cheap" all the time :D And I hate Nightmare.
But they both got through their problems! I figured they would (I mean, really, what choice did they have?) but... It was good to see it. And it was a good way to happen. So now we go on to the last chapter :(/:D |
 KnightlyLady 2009-10-11 . chapter 10Poor Riku :( He's lonely. I suppose Axel is, too, but not so much. I really like Larxene in this one. I'd be scared to have her for my voice of reason, though, lol. I prefer winter, too. Nothing happens during the summer. It's all about...doing nothing ^-^ Haha, Riku tried a suicide, and it was gross. Cute. |
 KnightlyLady 2009-10-11 . chapter 9I like the decision to wait, think. Way to be responsible, Axel :D Okay, I gotta read more, sorry |
 KnightlyLady 2009-10-11 . chapter 8I'm glad they got to go to the concert ^-^ Thanks, Ansem, even if you are a weirdo. April Fool's was great :D I wonder who Axel's food benefactor is. And I'm glad they finally got back at him, haha. Oh, and the Axel-egg! That was awesome, too. And the hand thing. It was sweet ^-^ |
 KnightlyLady 2009-10-11 . chapter 7Yay! I was sure Riku was going to ditch Axel, but... I'm so glad he didn't. He's totally the type to be ticklish. And he got Axel a thong! I kind of figured--I don't know, but as soon as Axel read the card, I was like, "Riku totally got him a thong." And lo and behold. It was an awesome scene. Oh, and the bit where Riku was drawing Axel. That was good :D |
 KnightlyLady 2009-10-11 . chapter 6Of course it all begins in February :D. This was really cute. I'm sorry about the whole responses-getting-shorter-and-shorter thing, haha. I have a tendency to get less patient about rambling about what I liked and more eager to move on with the story, haha. |
 KnightlyLady 2009-10-11 . chapter 5Hooray for confessions! Last chapter was contrasts, this chapter is parallel(?) :D Poor Demyx :( The kid's determined enough--I'm sure he'll find a way to go. And I'm definitely with Axel on the thinking-and-not-so-much-sleeping boat. It's extremely annoying. But yeah. This is good stuff. |
 KnightlyLady 2009-10-11 . chapter 4I need an Olette. Or an Axel, I suppose, haha. I hate gift-shopping :( All the contrasts between Riku and Axel are so prominent. But it's cool. It somehow makes them mesh together better :D |
 KnightlyLady 2009-10-11 . chapter 3I'm really growing fond of the snippet set-up. They're like snapshots into their lives. It's cool :D Snooze buttons are the best things in the world. Well, technically, they're horrible for me, but I love them to death, so... And really, who needs to get up on time? ^-^ Axel is definitely the Performing Arts type. And their friendship is progressing wonderfully :D |
 KnightlyLady 2009-10-11 . chapter 2"Awesome." Cute ^-^ That was a good scene. The last one, I mean. And I totally know how Axel feels. I cannot sit still when I'm watching people play/sing music. It's so awesome to be around musicians :D I like how their relationship is developing so far. Some people rush stuff like that, but... This is good. I like this ^-^ |
 KnightlyLady 2009-10-11 . chapter 1Huh. This was a very quiet chapter. But I like the set-up so far. The Sora with Kairi ignoring Riku thing made me sad. But, I really liked the bit between Riku and Namine. And the screen names/im conversation--it made me giggle ^-^. I also like the chapter name/month correlation thing you have going on. I shall keep reading :D |
 kez-chan 2009-07-27 . chapter 12*contented little sigh*
it doesnt feel finished but at the same time it didnt need more...weird.
I loved the subtleness of this and i'm kinda sad that ive read it all now but at least it ended with each of them knowing what they wanted, thanks for a great read
kez-chan <3 |
 kez-chan 2009-07-27 . chapter 10heheh the sprinkler bit made me think of haru in fruits basket when he just stands under the sprinklers in one part.
and Sora seems to be the only one noticing the difference in Riku. i like it that they both keep thinking of the other i cant wait til they see each other again |
 kez-chan 2009-07-26 . chapter 8my god that has to be my fave chapter so far id keep reading but i gotta go so ill finish later kay? |