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| Whilemina J. Farnsworth III 2007-12-16 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really neat. I like the concept. But where's Death? It might be a good thing that you can't se her, though. |
| Winter-Eyes 2006-10-12 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was an amazing story. You capture not only the Endless themselves, but the style of the man behind the endless as well. |
| PirateCarley 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed the point of view in this one. It's a refreshing change to many of the other Sandman fanfictions floating around. It's rare that I can find one to actually mull over and take my time thinking about it. Thanks for posting it. |
| LadyRhiyana 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abuseFascinating stuff. I think you've made a good effort at Gaiman's detached tone: the atmosphere, the patrons, their relation to the Endless. I really liked the zoom-out perspective before the end. |
| greenwine 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was fine. At first the absence of Destruction puzzled me, but as this script depicts the 'presence' of the Endless while doing their 'jobs'-or being themselves, if you will- it makes sense. Good. More? |
| Mousewolf 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was...wow. Wow. Err...wow. |
| Tom O'Bedlam 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cool. Very Neil Gaimen-like. I really liked the way you described them in the club, and how each of the Endless were related to the people in the club. It was also really cool the way you interwove the same characters throughout: the teenagers, the drunk Hispanics, all the people you see first show up again later. Like I said, cool, in a sort out-there Neil Gaimen way. |