your doing a good job on this story will you be continuein it?

When is the next chapter? I REALLY want to know what happens!

just read chapter 5 this cops are a lil on the dee dee dee side but other than that this story is getting freaking awesome as mess and i love it. Keep of the excellent work and no worries i dont know that cop stuff either

hey i absolutelt love ur story its brillant i can hear v's voice in my head everytime he talks i love it keep up the amazing job.

Ok requests. PLEASE can Evey and V meet (and hopefully fall in love again?)And for gods sake, now how is the brilliant dissapering act going to go for Evey? HM Good dtory, update very soon.

His height is 6 foot 3 i think. Portmans height id 5 foot 5. Here you are

WOW! I am very amazed and find myself unable to stop reading! I get home and immedietly check for an update, and when it says no, I sigh in bitterness. I really enjoy reading this, its well thought out, very descriptive and V sounds just like he should! I am very proud of you! Keep up the good work and update! I feel as if my birthday cake was stolen everytime I finish reading it! EXCELLENT!

LOL, nice fic going so far.

Well, Hugo is 6'2"... and that's pretty tall, no?

Hi really like this story so far it's cool that you are not doing the typical marysue that can be tiresome if you know what i mean like the character Danny she has a lot of spark in her :-) keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon !

Yes... magen that was a very interesting chapter yes yes ... hm i liek the concept of the cahppie i like the clever planning ... like the absent mindedness of the cops yes i like this yes ... hm yes yes "v" actually gave her a chance hmm yes yes i see ... Yes that wasa rather good chapter

I really like your work in this piece. A few typos, but nothing much to mention. I love the plot, and including Evey was completely ingenious.

ok i will be very professional in this review... there is somethings i like and don't like FIRST OF ALL i didn't see the movie yet and yeah ... I am surprisingly beginning to understand what its about LOL GOOD JOB on setting the scene and connecting stories. I also like that you took Mark's advice with the p.o.v. it really is very helpful and i would probably be lost if your didn't mention the kool little v thing. LOL i gotta say you are really good at your studying for this story I absolutely love the quotes etc... It really draws me into the story and makes it flow very nicely with the movie I also am happy that you listened to evalyn and continued to write your absolutely stunning story. I am ashamed that you do not remember our social stuies vocabulary (totalitarian) LOL... its ok u koolI really apreaciate that you number all the little things that you want to explain instead of just sticking it in the story andkilling the mood. The mace sounds violent but since every has a cd player shouldn't it be more modern like pepper spray ?? :) I am impressed with your abilility to flow through transitions instead of just bluntly switching topics. MUAHAHHA I ADORE THE MYSTERY IN tHIS ALL ! and the joke so college like LMFAO ... (yey) so try to remember to modernize like u can't have a skyscraper and then a lil peasent boy LOL and don't forget to leave people hanging on chapters its addicting. Good luck with all the numbers to come MUAHAH i'll be waiting..

Hey there. wow, i'm liking this so much! Saw he flick last night, and fell in love with it. I think you really captured Evey's personality in a post-V world (or at least how I would expect her to be). Great plot, and very well written! Kudos to you, and I can't wait for more! oh, Re: Chapter two spelling: "totalitarianism", "totalitarian", and "totalitarianistic"... wow, big words, lol. good luck!
~Leah (aka: Peaches the First)

I really enjoy your story so far. The cliff hangers at the end of the chapter are really nice and make sure that the person keeps reading. One suggestion try puttin it in P.O.V. it really helps the reader get more into the story and for one that has so much feeling in it it would be very useful. I'm happy your didn't do a one shot beacuse that would be a real waste of talent. Keep it up kiddo.

OMG this was so awesome it is like the best story ever so far. I saw the movie and this really captures the essence of it. You arean awesome writer keep it up. ON TO chapter 2! YES.