Just wanted you to know that I'm reading this story at a rapid pace again. Btw I looked up AdrenaLynn in case she was a character I forgot about... Found an adult movie star :p And how dare you make Kim and Shego wait so long to be together?

Ah-hA!

I knew that by now, you should have at least partially began thinking and possibly working and writing this next saga, xB

If so, there is but one question I wish for you to answer me: when did the original premise stopped being the premise of the story?

This has officially topped the sweetest chapter, it's completely adorable

The feeling you give it, their actions reflect their deep trust and love... It's beautiful

Thank you for writing it

Ok, now I get it why you left the blue dolt for the ending.

This is just so cool to read, the intense and eager wish for nothing bad to happen, and yet, only a miracle can actually save e day...

And me, unable to continue reading because life isn't fair and your cliffhanger is just sooooo epic...

As a writer, all I can say is: I admire you

Smene should take a hammer and pound some sense not him, and if that doesn't work, the man would still die, which would actually be a relief. Really, maybe Shego should have taken the poodle from him and try to find a decent home for the poor mutt; really, it wasn't his fault that the blue dolt had actually adopted/bought him. Send sme animal control at his place and get the dog a decent place, maybe even Dahntay and Betty would be willing... Anything to prevent that atrocious deed against nature, which Drakken is by himself but him taking care of another living creature? Euthanasia is looking mighty good...

Aww, and here I was, hoping that the remaining chapters were with the family dealings xD

Really sweet way of ending it, follows simple and not screwy logic, which works wonders, x3

Although your prospect for the next chapter isn't that enticing, it's incredibly scary to even consider that idiot's return. And I thought that Ed would be enough Lipsky for the universe, you just had to bring in his moronic, actually considered a doctor, blue cousin to the mix again. I feel that the end of the universe in near, @@;;;;

No no no no no no no no no no *wags index finger*

This is going even better than expected, so it's probably going to turn out even better than expected.

Don't down-play your own writing, I haven't, and if I ever did give signs of it being so, it was mostly joking.

This is definetly turning out to be the best part of the development of their relation, not counting the random addition of Todd, which was the apex of sweetness.

So never ever down-play your own work, jokes allowed, xP

Epic!

I've been wondering what would happen with such a gathering. Jason's mistress comment was brilliant, and the overall interaction was awesome. This is beyond great!

XD that was totally unexpected. I guess Shego now appreciates Kim more so.

It amazing how things change when the perspective is also changed.

Funny though, I have a cat, and whenever he has his belly shown and I try to rub it, he bites, xD guess it comes to show that he is a cat and not a dog, xD

Yeah, Todd is definetly Kimmie's mini-me, xD

You had me bawling my eyes out before the glimpse in the future bit. Really, things could have gone so differently, he could have remained forever with the pair, even if you did mention him having to leave for an orphanage. It could have just been so different, and so much better for the trio!

Awww, she has grown used to and maybe even fond of Todd!

This is one of the most adorable chapters, and the only way to be topped is if the following none chapters become even sweeter.

Aww, Kimmie has her own clone! A little mini-me, male version!

Scuh a sweet chapter, x9

Yeah, I guess he got the worst parents, and that being said when I know Betty's mom; I thought no one could top her at that department, and yet here you go, proving me wrong. And with some one like Todd! The poor kid doesn't need that; he's lucky to have sanity from what I can tell

Damn, I'm loving this kid, and he is certainly creepy.

Only thing to say: terrific new OC, way to go on creative levels, D

Ah, now deny me they're going to get into some sort of parental role with the kid, and I'm ready to literally blow my mind. Well, not really, but you get my drift, right?