JackRai is the best couple. It was so cute. Next time there should be a sequal with Chase trying to seduce Jack to the Heylin side. That would be good. And if you would...add some JackRai smut. I love smut Smut makes the world go round! Yay! Anyway...see ya.

Damn Omi and his moment-ruining-... self!! Grr!!
So cute! Awesome Fic! I really enjoyed reading it...
Poor Rai, panicking about Jack's-supposed-death...
Aw! I like Jack being evil... but he doesn't do it well, have to admit that... -_-'
Great fic! Keep writing!
Cheers,
RG

It was a sweet fic.

CUTE!! this was so cute! It could have been improved by a little kissy kissy stuff but it was good anyway! ^.^

aw that was so cute. the little moment too! =^-^=

Respect 'The moment!'

Moment!

Nice! Once again, another RaiJack moment interupted by Omi... (shakes head)

Bad Omi! -slaps- They were having a moment! X3