That was very good, I really liked that story.
~Blaze

I like it. :)

I don't normally read Star Wars fanfiction...but I may have to break that habit. I love the subtle curves this story takes away from canon. So intersting!

What a great story, an unusual plot with Anakin as Wraith, while still being Vader! I really like the way he met Luke, very well written, the reader can picture the emotions and scene. I am looking forward to the rest of the stories you write about these two!

omg thats so sad but you've done a really good job XD

A bittersweet ending to a beautiful story...too bad Leia wasn't there to share in the story's end.

"All in good time, son." VFA smiles.

Anakin Skywalker died with Padme Amidala. Darth Vader died with Leia Organa. This man is whoever his son needs him to be.

This could be continued if you wish, a great AU. But it does well torturing your readers as a one-shot as well.

Good job,

VFA

I guess Luke is still unlearned enough in the force he would not discover Anakin's identity without the latter's intent. And this move is going to divert the storyline greatly - instead of going to Yoda, Luke is being trained by Anakin/Vader in disguise. What food for imagination! :)

See now, that's a cliffhanger if ever I read one. You should be legally obligated to finish it :)

very nice oneshot

SO CUTE! :)

Very nice so far. Sad that Leia died, though. Keep wwriting!

Very very interesting. I like it.

And without Leia, of course Anakin had to give the Rebels the plans.

I love your Vader redemption stories.

Good Story. Poor Leia.

What a fascinating story! I wish you were continuing it, but I respect your decision not to.

Thanks for writing!