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Reviews For: The Ones We Hold CLose

Kanzashi-chan
2006-04-22
ch 1,
abuseLove it so far! Please keep writing!
sola-bola
2006-04-20
ch 1,
abuseBAH! you have to update fast or I'll die! >.< I love this story and OMG YAY Hayes is not dead
marinawings
2006-04-17
ch 1,
abusei think you had a good idea with this one. i like it so far. very creative and original. keep it up. i'd like to read more.
LittleLonnie
2006-04-16
ch 1,
abuseOne thing - MORE!! End of the week? Kiddin me? Lol we're at sunday now! *sob* Oh well! Better waiting then never getting more! This is exiting and very good! Both Hayes and Lumpy (inc. Ann, Jimmy, Preston) is my favourite characters and it wa sso sad when they died in the book/novel! So I liked this version really well! Can't wait for more =)
fallen-angel
2006-04-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is great! I love how you kept Hayes, Lumpy and Choy alive, cause I was a little bummed out about them being killed in the movie.

You've really made a good start here and I can't wait to see what happens next! Hope to see more of Jimmy! And of Jack ofcourse...and Hayes... and the others, haha! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
elvespiratesandcowboysohmy
2006-04-16
ch 1,
abuseooh! I likey! This would have been a much better turnout in the movie! Can't wait for another chapter! Keep 'em coming!
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