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Reviews for:
Unwelcome
Elixabith
8/29/08 . chapter 1
dude i'm just lost. a flashaback would be nice! :)
Banana Rum
4/22/06 . chapter 1
I like the way this is written - very personal. And, of cours, Edward and Alphonse are the best. :) However, the thread of the story is very elusive, and I'm not quite sure what exactly is going on?
Kalliel
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