You should probably make a sequel!

You're story doesn't have an intimate scene but I can't understand why it is so romantic and funny at the same time hahahahahaha

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!

haahahahah

Love it

That was cute. Just the reason I like this couple; their gender-friendliness.

this is gorgeous!

lol, good stuff

I LOVE THIS!

funny LOL XD

uhuhuhu I love it! This is a kawai paring! My prefer, in fact!

Putting you on Author Alert pays off! (grin)

I love these two, and you write their interaction so well. They've had a few months together now, and Takumi has a small snarky side to him now, feeling comfortable enough to tease Akira. Arika is just as comfortable beating him up (gently). It's very believable and enjoyable.

Any chance you might start up a collection of shorts about these two? I know I'd read it.

I've been meaning to review this; sorry it's a bit belated.

One of the neat things you do is have Akira choose to remain a boy. I recognize that she's been raised as a boy all her life and that such an upbringing would obviously stay with her, but she never seemed totally comfortable as a boy. I like how she doesn't want to dress like a girl because she wants to stay with Takumi. In so many words. She's so damn cute, our beloved little cross-dresser.

And I like how laid back Takumi is. I'm sure the idea that he's sleeping and changing and living in the same dorm room with the girl-he's-friends-with-maybe-dating-maybe-not isn't totally lost on him. He's just too much of a gentleman to bring up that point. He leaves the choice to stay with him up to her; he prefers her happiness/comfort over his. Plus, it's fun seeing Akira leave brusque reminders on his notebooks or tickling him to death. They really work well off of each other.

Anyway, I just wanna let you know I love your writing and I'll be checking ff dotnet for updates from you.