Reviews for Do There Embrace

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chelsea-chee 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseThe way you link your words together & the details simply made this story. Its wonderfully creepy & dark & I simply adored it. If any other person would try this (myself probably included), it'd sounded creppy & disturbing, but the way you worded it made it simply amazing. Wonderful work. Thanxs! :) :p ;)
Melitza 2008-01-27 ch 1,	abuseNow that's sodding twisted enough that it deserved a general nod. nods
AzureBalmonk 2007-06-10 ch 1,	abuseso wait... who does she love more? This story was good, but incredibly confusing as to who Sakura likes more. I hope its Naruto because... if she did it just to replace Naruto with Sasuke in her mind, then that's... wow w/e it's still and original fic I'll ive you that.
HannahSakura.Pinoy 2007-05-23 ch 1,	abuseIt's beautiful!
Ebonytwinkle 2007-04-17 ch 1,	abuseWow. Lol, I have to admit that when I started reading this I was more than a little creeped and was simply going to turn away…but, than the need to understand washed over me and forced me to finish reading. :D I’m REALY glad I did as you’ve just put me in a state of awe. I really don’t know how to describe this as anything other than powerful! And even though I must say I’m still just a bit creeped-out, your work was just so hauntingly explicit that it really did pull me into it. :) You’re SCARY good, I applaud you! LOL XD
sillymail 2007-01-21 ch 1,	abuseInteresting.
Makani 2007-01-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseI liked this story for its creepy atmosphere and the lingering, haunted way Naruto and Sakura pay tribute to their dead companion. I'm not sure where I first saw this posted, but it was several weeks back, and I've been trying to place the title since then, and I think I have it. Andrew Marvell's To His Coy Mistress. "The grave's a fine and private place, But none, I think, do there embrace." It's a lovely sounding title and an appropriate reference to a carpe diem poem. Naruto and Sakura are fiercely alive, but death is always just below the surface.
Labbess 2006-12-13 ch 1,	abuse0_0 Wow. I thought this fic was going to be unbelievably kinky, but it's.. It's kind of... I dunno, touching? 0_0 ! Not THAT kind of touching! XD Loved it, work very well done.
SabakuNoBrandye 2006-09-08 ch 1,	abuseOdd, but very good. I like the the last three words...they just kind of say something to me, I guess. Hmm.
health-critic 2006-08-13 ch 1,	abuseoh my god.. That was endearingly beautiful. You made my heart ache. It's a wonderful portrayal of how some people (and maybe sadly a vast majority) cannot understand or percieve things the way they truly are. This was hauntingly elegant and altogether very sad. "As she begins to rock in his embrace, he slides his hands down until his fingers are tangled up in the heat of her, shifting and fluttering with a skill that in life, he never had a chance to use for anything more than killing." I loved that line and so many others. You are a brilliant writer. Your work is something to behold.
Essyllus 2006-08-09 ch 1,	abuseErr... it didn't really do it for me. I liked the parts where Sasuke struggles to reach up, and how Sakura still calls out to him.. but other than that, this was just a weird little one-shot. I might add it to my C2, though.
Y0ko 2006-07-29 ch 1,	abusegreat man
RachelBaby666 2006-07-18 ch 1,	abuseThat was THE beststory that I have ever read wow i almost started crying Amazing
abbu jabbu 2006-07-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseo_O
deity of death1 2006-07-11 ch 1,	abuseWow... This is just... Wow...

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