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Glimmer of Brutality 2007-11-09 ch 7,	abuse! Okay, I'm back from snoozing and I must say...this fic is so awesome! I mean, i like the way you describe their feelings unlike other fics where they're like, 'she kissed him' But you go in so much more depth than them! =D Onto next chappie!
Glimmer of Brutality 2007-11-09 ch 2,	abuseLike ZOMG! You're an amaxing author. Okay, so it's like 3am right now, so I have to sleep. But I promise I'll read the rest soon!
Mistress of Earth 2007-03-05 ch 17,	abuseplease update soon!
TrishBratt006 2007-03-03 ch 18,	abuseYAY! I love it! I know it sounds cliche but... ya- that's it. I love it!^^
Tolea-String-PurpleChoco-Ma... 2006-09-05 ch 18,	abuseNot bad.I liked this story.A nice solid 5/5,or *.Your my first.I advise your celebratory with such a "honor."Im celebrating with a nice veiwing of cardcaptor sakura and tsubasa,maybe holic if I can find it.So,I hope you crank out more great ff fics and you also keep in touch.Best wishes! -Tolea
Roxasdestroy 2006-09-04 ch 18,	abuseBeen slacking on reading this last update, but I love it. The whole story was honestly perfection. And good luck with your studies. I know how crazy it gets. I just started this week, and it's been taking up so much of my time. But I do hope to see more stories from you soon, they're really great.
GerardsGirlx3 2006-09-04 ch 18,	abuseOmg that was one of the best stories I have ever read! Wonderful job! =]
Bianka-chan 2006-09-02 ch 18,	abuseSUCCESS! I'M IN! Huh? Was that the ending? Thought we were only half-way through a few chapters ago... Eh? Maybe I'm wrong about this being over, or maybe I'm wrong about it being halfway through not too long ago. Anyway, I loved this chapter=) It was all very poetic, with very quote-able lines throughout. The ending seemed like a perfect circle, going right back to the ending of Advent Children and what I believe it should have ended like. Maybe that's what you were thinking as you wrote this. Don't worry about not updating this story for a little bit. School comes first, even if we don't want to do it. I know; I'm nervous about university work, too. I'm in my last year of high school. So far, this year is tough work! I haven't managed to write out a single chapter of any of my ongoing stories since I started school... As my mom says, though, "I suffer because I want to." I'm in 8 or 9 clubs, so I'm kinda asking for it... ^__^ Like I said earlier, this chapter was beautiful! If this really is the end of the story, then it's a great end. Dare I say it...? It was perfection. (Yeah, I went there). ~Bianka-chan.
Rend 2006-09-02 ch 18,	abuseWow, is that it? I thought you said there would be more...Well it was a worthwile read, truly enjoyable and captivating...I look forward to more of your work. Rend.
... 2006-09-02 ch 18, anon.	abuseBad Ending...Absolute waste of time. Next time do something better. You Suck.
StormHornet 2006-08-30 ch 18,	abuseNo, no. I'm sure I would have loved this fic had it not been for the "Cloud had loved Aeris as a sister" bits. C'mon. I ship Cloud/Tifa, but you can't just lie about his feelings for Aeris. The whole point of Cloud/Tifa is that he has to get over Aeris, and her death, etc., and learn to love Tifa.
MidnightWolf13 2006-08-29 ch 18,	abuseWas that the ending? WAH!! It was so good! Your writing is so 'awesomeness'! Hehe... ^^
BabyGurl278 2006-08-29 ch 18,	abuseWow. I must say that last chapter just really caused me to think, and...words can't describe how awesome that last chapter was. The long wait was surely worth it, but it's over? Wahh! I'm really sad now. But, I'm glad it came to a great and beautiful ending. This story was surely worth reading and I'm really glad I decided to read this. This last chapter, the beginning was just wonderful. I loved how you talked about love and how you connected it to other things, it surely make me think about love in a new perspective. Great job on that! Is the dream about Michi foreshadowing something or just a dream that Cloud had, relating to the question Michi had asked? Hmm...has me thinking. I loved the ending and it was really sweet. I really wish AC had ended that way. It seems similar cause I can just picture Aeris and Zack talking, and saying something like that. Because, I believe I'm right, but Cloud does say, "Yeah, I'm not alone" at the end of the movie. Or something similar. Either way, it was perfect! ^_^ Wonderful job, once again! Keep up the good work! Baby-G
ripitupgenki 2006-08-29 ch 18,	abusesuch a great story. please keep writing ^^
Kiome-Yasha 2006-08-29 ch 18,	abuseNow that was a great story! I love your way of words with nature and an emotion as an example. I brings out the love and beauty espically the couple Cloud and Tifa being in it. Great job! Hope to see another Cloud and Tifa fic from you soon! P.S. Don't let school get you down, but work hard as well!

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